考研英语作文批改范例7
<p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="workers">workers</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="project">project</span> <span word="hope">hope</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="plan">plan</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="offer">offer</span> <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="aid">aid</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="child">child</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="remote">remote</span> <span word="area">area</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="arrange">arrange</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="child">child</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="conditions">conditions</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="hope">hope</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="child">child</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="girl">girl</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="poverty">poverty</span>（<span word="in">in</span> <span word="poverty">poverty</span>或者或直接变成<span word="poor">poor</span>）,<span word="and">and</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="orphan">orphan</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="proper">proper</span>. <span word="Besides">Besides</span>,<span word="I">I</span> <span word="hope">hope</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="girl">girl</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="virtuous">virtuous</span>,<span word="healthy">healthy</span>,<span word="studious">studious</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="six">six</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="old">old</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="offer">offer</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="expenses">expenses</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="studying">studying</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="until">until</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="accomplishes">accomplishes</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="schooling">schooling</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="sef">sef</span>-<span word="dependence">dependence</span>.<span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="expecting">expecting</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="offer">offer</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="girl">girl</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="me">me</span>. <span word="Best">Best</span> <span word="regards">regards</span>. <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>, <span word="Ling">Ling</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> </p>
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