考研英语作文批改范例10
<p> <span word="Mr">Mr</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Mrss">Mrss</span> <span word="Id">Id</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="contribute">contribute</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Project">Project</span> <span word="Hope">Hope</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="offer">offer</span>（<span word="offering">offering</span>） <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="aid">aid</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="child">child</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="remote">remote</span> <span word="now">now</span>.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="didnt">didnt</span> <span word="mean">mean</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="trouble">trouble</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span>,<span word="would">would</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="candicate">candicate</span> <span word="please">please</span>?<span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="studying">studying</span> （<span word="studies">studies</span>）<span word="hard">hard</span> ,<span word="gets">gets</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="top">top</span> <span word="grade">grade</span>,<span word="love">love</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="enjoy">enjoy</span> <span word="everything">everything</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span>, <span word="have">have</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="enthetic">enthetic</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="benefit">benefit</span> <span word="works">works</span>,<span word="thirsty">thirsty</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="acknowledge">acknowledge</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="cant">cant</span> <span word="afford">afford</span> <span word="him">him</span>.<span word="What">What</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="important">important</span>,<span word="he">he</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ambitions">ambitions</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="create">create</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="country">country</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="grow">grow</span> <span word="up">up</span>.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="coule">coule</span>（<span word="could">could</span>） <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="studying">studying</span> <span word="years">years</span>.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="busy">busy</span>,<span word="but">but</span> <span word="Ill">Ill</span> <span word="thank">thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="me">me</span>. <span word="Good">Good</span> <span word="luck">luck</span>! <span word="Yours">Yours</span>, <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> </p>
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