考研大作文修改交通规范
<p> 原文： <span word="What">What</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="ridiculous">ridiculous</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="thought">thought</span>-<span word="provoking">provoking</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="picture">picture</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span>! <span word="As">As</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="subtly">subtly</span> <span word="depicted">depicted</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="drawing">drawing</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="man">man</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="hurried">hurried</span> <span word="cutting">cutting</span> <span word="across">across</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="railing">railing</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="middle">middle</span> <span word="never">never</span>-<span word="ending">ending</span> <span word="road">road</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="black">black</span> <span word="handbag">handbag</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>. <span word="Dangerous">Dangerous</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="doing">doing</span> <span word="is">is</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="boy">boy</span> <span word="seems">seems</span> <span word="ignorant">ignorant</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="Simple">Simple</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="picture">picture</span> <span word="is">is</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="symbolic">symbolic</span> <span word="meaning">meaning</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="deep">deep</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="ocean">ocean</span>. <span word="Our">Our</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="witnessed">witnessed</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="variety">variety</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="examples">examples</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="against">against</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="laws">laws</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="example">example</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="accident">accident</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="happened">happened</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="month">month</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="reported">reported</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="twenty">twenty</span>-<span word="year">year</span>-<span word="old">old</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="died">died</span>, <span word="because">because</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="against">against</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="rules">rules</span>. <span word="Apparently">Apparently</span>, <span word="this">this</span> <span word="accident">accident</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="sparked">sparked</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="fierce">fierce</span> <span word="debate">debate</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="society">society</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="situation">situation</span>, <span word="being">being</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="serious">serious</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="effective">effective</span> <span word="measures">measures</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="command">command</span> <span word="publics">publics</span> <span word="behavior">behavior</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="thing">thing</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="significant">significant</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="laws">laws</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="regulations">regulations</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="worked">worked</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="early">early</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="control">control</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="publics">publics</span> <span word="behavior">behavior</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="another">another</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="government">government</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="build">build</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="line">line</span> <span word="bridges">bridges</span>. <span word="Then">Then</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="convenient">convenient</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="across">across</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="least">least</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="constantly">constantly</span> <span word="educated">educated</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="abide">abide</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="rules">rules</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="word">word</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="emphasis">emphasis</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="regulations">regulations</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="harmonious">harmonious</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span>. 修改之后： <span word="What">What</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="ridiculous">ridiculous</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="thought">thought</span>-<span word="provoking">provoking</span> <span word="cartoon">cartoon</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span>! <span word="As">As</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="subtly">subtly</span> <span word="depicted">depicted</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="man">man</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="black">black</span> <span word="handbag">handbag</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>, <span word="hurriedly">hurriedly</span> <span word="jumping">jumping</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="rail">rail</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="middle">middle</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="road">road</span>. <span word="Dangerous">Dangerous</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="turn">turn</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="blind">blind</span> <span word="eye">eye</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="excited">excited</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="hear">hear</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="praising">praising</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="bus">bus</span>. <span word="Simple">Simple</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="picture">picture</span> <span word="is">is</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="symbolic">symbolic</span> <span word="meaning">meaning</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="deep">deep</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="ocean">ocean</span>. <span word="According">According</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="recent">recent</span> <span word="survey">survey</span>, 2,343 <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span> <span word="occurred">occurred</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="China">China</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="results">results</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="hundreds">hundreds</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="death">death</span>. <span word="Our">Our</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="witnessed">witnessed</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="variety">variety</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="examples">examples</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="behaviors">behaviors</span> <span word="against">against</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="laws">laws</span>, <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="accident">accident</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="month">month</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="foremost">foremost</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="reported">reported</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="twenty">twenty</span>-<span word="year">year</span>-<span word="old">old</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="student">student</span>, <span word="XX">XX</span>, <span word="was">was</span> <span word="killed">killed</span> <span word="owing">owing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="improper">improper</span> <span word="behavior">behavior</span> <span word="against">against</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="rules">rules</span>. <span word="Were">Were</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="situation">situation</span> <span word="continue">continue</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="pay">pay</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="price">price</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="situation">situation</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="serious">serious</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="effective">effective</span> <span word="measures">measures</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="end">end</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="problem">problem</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="thing">thing</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="significant">significant</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="supervisory">supervisory</span> <span word="role">role</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="laws">laws</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="regulations">regulations</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="enhanced">enhanced</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="another">another</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="government">government</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="build">build</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="over">over</span>-<span word="line">line</span> <span word="bridges">bridges</span>. <span word="Then">Then</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="convenient">convenient</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="across">across</span>. <span word="Last">Last</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="least">least</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="constantly">constantly</span> <span word="educated">educated</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="abide">abide</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="rules">rules</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="word">word</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="emphasis">emphasis</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="relevant">relevant</span> <span word="regulations">regulations</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="harmonious">harmonious</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span>.（234）</p>
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