考研英语作文批改范例4
<p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="whom">whom</span> <span word="It">It</span>（<span word="it">it</span> 不用大写） <span word="may">may</span> <span word="concern">concern</span>, <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="gold">gold</span>-<span word="collar">collar</span> <span word="worker">worker</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="environment">environment</span>, <span word="and">and</span> （删掉）<span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="hope">hope</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="assistance">assistance</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="drop">drop</span>-<span word="out">out</span> <span word="girl">girl</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="whom">whom</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="support">support</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="hoping">hoping</span>（<span word="hope">hope</span>） <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="candidate">candidate</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="girl">girl</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="developed">developed</span> <span word="rural">rural</span> <span word="aeras">aeras</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Western">Western</span> <span word="China">China</span> .<span word="Whats">Whats</span> <span word="more">more</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="girl">girl</span> <span word="drop">drop</span>（主谓一致） <span word="out">out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="lack">lack</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="money">money</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="she">she</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="willing">willing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="return">return</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="hometown">hometown</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="built">built</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="graduation">graduation</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="university">university</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="plan">plan</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="offer">offer</span> 3000 <span word="yuan">yuan</span> <span word="per">per</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="pay">pay</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="tuition">tuition</span> <span word="fee">fee</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="expenses">expenses</span> <span word="until">until</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="graduates">graduates</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="hunts">hunts</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="decent">decent</span> <span word="job">job</span>. <span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="time">time</span> ! <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>, <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> </p>
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