考研英语作文批改范例12
<p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="whom">whom</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="concern">concern</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Project">Project</span> <span word="Hope">Hope</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="child">child</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="suffered">suffered</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="earthquake">earthquake</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="happened">happened</span> <span word="recently">recently</span>.（原句过于啰嗦，建议改为<span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="child">child</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="suffered">suffered</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="earthquake">earthquake</span> <span word="happened">happened</span> <span word="recently">recently</span>.）<span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="seek">seek</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="select">select</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="candidate">candidate</span>. <span word="Firstly">Firstly</span>, <span word="this">this</span> <span word="child">child</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="live">live</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="remote">remote</span> <span word="town">town</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="lost">lost</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="incapable">incapable</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="to">to</span> （删除）<span word="work">work</span>. <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="child">child</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="now">now</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="Grade">Grade</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Grade">Grade</span> <span word="Six">Six</span>. <span word="Last">Last</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="least">least</span>, <span word="theres">theres</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="donation">donation</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="already">already</span>（<span word="he">he</span> <span word="hasnt">hasnt</span> <span word="received">received</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="donation">donation</span> <span word="till">till</span> <span word="now">now</span>）. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="right">right</span> <span word="person">person</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="me">me</span>, <span word="please">please</span> <span word="contact">contact</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="liming">liming</span>@<span word="sina">sina</span>.<span word="com">com</span>.<span word="cn">cn</span>. <span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="kindly">kindly</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reply">reply</span>. <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p> </p>
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