考研英语作文批改范例15
<p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="whom">whom</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="concern">concern</span>, <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="senior">senior</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="Wuhan">Wuhan</span> <span word="University">University</span>. <span word="Supported">Supported</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="parents">parents</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="contribute">contribute</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Project">Project</span> <span word="Hope">Hope</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="offering">offering</span> <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="aid">aid</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="child">child</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="attitude">attitude</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="hard">hard</span> <span word="studying">studying</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="afford">afford</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="tuition">tuition</span>（建议使用定语从句表达，<span word="who">who</span> <span word="studies">studies</span> <span word="hard">hard</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="forced">forced</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="drop">drop</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="afford">afford</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="tuitions">tuitions</span>）. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="offer">offer</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="years">years</span>（） <span word="tuition">tuition</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="touch">touch</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="child">child</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="encourage">encourage</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="she">she</span>（<span word="him">him</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="her">her</span>） <span word="to">to</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="well">well</span>. <span word="After">After</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="school">school</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="offering">offering</span> （<span word="still">still</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="offer">offer</span>）<span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="aid">aid</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="child">child</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="she">she</span>（<span word="him">him</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="her">her</span>） <span word="accomplish">accomplish</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="elementary">elementary</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span>（<span word="since">since</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="have">have</span>） <span word="a">a</span> <span word="stable">stable</span> <span word="source">source</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="incoming">incoming</span>（复数<span word="incomings">incomings</span>）. <span word="Your">Your</span>（<span word="Yours">Yours</span>） <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>, <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> </p>
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