考研英语作文批改范例11
<p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="sir">sir</span>/<span word="madam">madam</span>,（不能这么表示选择，需要改为 <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>，） <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="child">child</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="remote">remote</span> <span word="area">area</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="offer">offer</span> <span word="him">him</span>/（<span word="or">or</span>）<span word="her">her</span> <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="till">till</span> <span word="he">he</span>/（<span word="or">or</span>）<span word="she">she</span> <span word="graduated">graduated</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="university">university</span>. <span word="Well">Well</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="requirement">requirement</span>（使用复数，<span word="requirements">requirements</span>） <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="person">person</span>. <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="he">he</span>/<span word="she">she</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="heavy">heavy</span> <span word="burden">burden</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="he">he</span>/<span word="she">she</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="willing">willing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="hard">hard</span>. <span word="Any">Any</span> <span word="child">child</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="requirement">requirement</span> （<span word="meeting">meeting</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="requirements">requirements</span>） <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="candidate">candidate</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="child">child</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="child">child</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="constant">constant</span> <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="semester">semester</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="undertake">undertake</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="childs">childs</span> <span word="teaching">teaching</span> <span word="fees">fees</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="post">post</span> <span word="him">him</span>/<span word="her">her</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span> <span word="studying">studying</span> <span word="materials">materials</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="textbooks">textbooks</span>, <span word="reading">reading</span> <span word="materials">materials</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="on">on</span>. <span word="Besides">Besides</span>, <span word="Id">Id</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="visit">visit</span> <span word="him">him</span>/<span word="her">her</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="vacation">vacation</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="convenient">convenient</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="child">child</span>. <span word="Would">Would</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="please">please</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="person">person</span>? <span word="Ill">Ill</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="appreciated">appreciated</span>（改为<span word="grateful">grateful</span>）. <span word="Please">Please</span> <span word="contact">contact</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="at">at</span> 13034160000 <span word="or">or</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="e">e</span>-<span word="mails">mails</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="sitcom">sitcom</span>@<span word="yahoo">yahoo</span>.<span word="com">com</span>.<span word="cn">cn</span>. <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>, <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> </p>
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