考研英语作文批改范例5
<p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span>（<span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>）: <span word="I">I</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="ask">ask</span> <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="favour">favour</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="candidate">candidate</span> ,<span word="as">as</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="concerned">concerned</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Project">Project</span> <span word="Hope">Hope</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="Project">Project</span> <span word="Hope">Hope</span> ,<span word="from">from</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="perspective">perspective</span> ,<span word="is">is</span> <span word="abviously">abviously</span> （<span word="obviously">obviously</span>）<span word="meaningful">meaningful</span>. <span word="Through">Through</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="project">project</span>, <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="discontinuing">discontinuing</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="studies">studies</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="helped">helped</span> .<span word="The">The</span> <span word="candidate">candidate</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="aid">aid</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="diligent">diligent</span> <span word="girl">girl</span> <span word="desiring">desiring</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="opportunity">opportunity</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="credit">credit</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="one">one</span>,<span word="however">however</span>,<span word="her">her</span> <span word="attitude">attitude</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="life">life</span> ,<span word="of">of</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="critical">critical</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="aid">aid</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="half">half</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="salary">salary</span> <span word="until">until</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="living">living</span>.<span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>,<span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="greatly">greatly</span> <span word="convinced">convinced</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="communication">communication</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="us">us</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="advice">advice</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="aspect">aspect</span>. <span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="letter">letter</span>（<span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="letter">letter</span>）. <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>, <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> </p>
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