考研英语作文批改范例18
<p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="administrator">administrator</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Project">Project</span> <span word="Hope">Hope</span>:（英语中没有冒号，称呼后面用逗号，另外，你的称呼不要这么写，直接写<span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>就好） <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="candidate">candidate</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="offer">offer</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="aid">aid</span>.（这句话没有表达清楚，可以改成<span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="ask">ask</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="a">a</span> .） <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="student">student</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="dont">dont</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="income">income</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="Id">Id</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="primary">primary</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="whose">whose</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="expense">expense</span> <span word="wont">wont</span> <span word="costs">costs</span> （情态动词后面用动词原形）<span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="wish">wish</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="diligent">diligent</span> <span word="girl">girl</span> <span word="which">which</span> （<span word="whose">whose</span>做形容词）<span word="family">family</span> <span word="cant">cant</span> <span word="afford">afford</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="treasure">treasure</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="asist">asist</span>（名词形式<span word="assistance">assistance</span>） <span word="I">I</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="her">her</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="plan">plan</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="tribute">tribute</span> 200 <span word="yuan">yuan</span> <span word="per">per</span> <span word="month">month</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="child">child</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="help">help</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="send">send</span> <span word="she">she</span> （动词后面用宾格形式<span word="her">her</span>）<span word="some">some</span> <span word="books">books</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="aticles">aticles</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="useful">useful</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="study">study</span>, <span word="too">too</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="regurally">regurally</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="ask">ask</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="condition">condition</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="life">life</span>.<span word="Whats">Whats</span> <span word="more">more</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="call">call</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="classmates">classmates</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="remote">remote</span> <span word="area">area</span> .<span word="We">We</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="hometown">hometown</span> <span word="together">together</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="vacation">vacation</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="more">more</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="haldly">haldly</span> <span word="wait">wait</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="pleasant">pleasant</span> <span word="trip">trip</span>. <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="answer">answer</span>.<span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span><span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p> </p>
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