考研英语作文写作指导(二)
<p> 考研英语复习资料 考研英语作文写作指导 作文中的部分新颖表达及部分垃圾词汇的替代 考研英语作文要想拿高分，就必须有一些与众不同的词汇或表达方式，笔者在这里所说的垃圾词汇并没有贬低这些表达的意思，大家可以想象一个阅卷老师在阅几千份试卷的过程中就看到几千次相同表达，分数可想而知，所以如何取舍你懂的。 <span word="A">A</span>、认为（尽量避免的表达，以下例句同，不再重复说明：<span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span>/<span word="I">I</span> <span word="believe">believe</span>/<span word="As">As</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="concerned">concerned</span>） 1.别人认为：<span word="assume">assume</span>, <span word="argue">argue</span>, <span word="contend">contend</span>, <span word="maitain">maitain</span>, <span word="hold">hold</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="perspective">perspective</span> <span word="that">that</span> 2.我认为： <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="inclined">inclined</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="convinced">convinced</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="aware">aware</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="cling">cling</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="belief">belief</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="B">B</span>、不同人有不同看法（<span word="Different">Different</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="opinions">opinions</span>） <span word="Peoples">Peoples</span> <span word="perspective">perspective</span> <span word="diverge">diverge</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="controversial">controversial</span> <span word="issue">issue</span>. <span word="There">There</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="consensus">consensus</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="concerning">concerning</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="controversial">controversial</span> <span word="issue">issue</span>. <span word="C">C</span>、举例（<span word="for">for</span> <span word="example">example</span>/<span word="for">for</span> <span word="instance">instance</span>/<span word="let">let</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="example">example</span>） 1.<span word="A">A</span> <span word="fitting">fitting</span>/ <span word="telling">telling</span>/ <span word="apt">apt</span>/ <span word="striking">striking</span> <span word="example">example</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> 2.<span word="A">A</span> <span word="case">case</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> 3.<span word="Further">Further</span> <span word="lending">lending</span> <span word="credence">credence</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="example">example</span> <span word="of">of</span> 4.<span word="This">This</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="aptly">aptly</span>/ <span word="well">well</span> <span word="exemplified">exemplified</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="illustrated">illustrated</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="case">case</span> <span word="of">of</span>+<span word="n">n</span>. <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="that">that</span> + 句子 <span word="the">the</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="case">case</span> 5.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="illustration">illustration</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="example">example</span> <span word="of">of</span>, <span word="who">who</span>. 6.<span word="When">When</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="comes">comes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="music">music</span> <span word="talent">talent</span>, <span word="eminent">eminent</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span> <span word="ranging">ranging</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="Mozart">Mozart</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Beethvoen">Beethvoen</span> <span word="come">come</span> <span word="immediately">immediately</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="me">me</span>. （此处也是细节） 7.<span word="To">To</span> <span word="illustrate">illustrate</span> <span word="this">this</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="case">case</span> <span word="of">of</span> 8.<span word="Imagine">Imagine</span>/ <span word="Visualize">Visualize</span>/ <span word="Picture">Picture</span>/ <span word="Suppose">Suppose</span> <span word="D">D</span>、迷恋，喜欢，上瘾（少用具体多用抽象） <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="invariably">invariably</span> <span word="fascinated">fascinated</span>/ <span word="captivated">captivated</span>/ <span word="enchanted">enchanted</span> <span word="with">with</span>/ <span word="by">by</span> <span word="Hardly">Hardly</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="resist">resist</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="temptation">temptation</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="sth">sth</span>. <span word="be">be</span> <span word="obsessed">obsessed</span> <span word="with">with</span>/<span word="by">by</span> <span word="E">E</span>、数据引用 <span word="Statistic">Statistic</span> <span word="figures">figures</span> <span word="show">show</span>/ <span word="manifest">manifest</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Many">Many</span> <span word="surveys">surveys</span>/ <span word="investigations">investigations</span> 显示 <span word="that">that</span> 越来越多的 <span word="universities">universities</span> <span word="have">have</span> 重视 <span word="the">the</span> <span word="credit">credit</span> <span word="system">system</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="peobably">peobably</span> <span word="would">would</span> 带来不好的呃影像.（中文从一下中选词） 显示： <span word="manifest">manifest</span>/ <span word="illustrate">illustrate</span> 重视： <span word="place">place</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="great">great</span>/ <span word="considerable">considerable</span> <span word="emphasis">emphasis</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="attach">attach</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="importance">importance</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="account">account</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="sb">sb</span>. <span word="ignore">ignore</span>/ <span word="turn">turn</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="blind">blind</span> <span word="eye">eye</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="sth">sth</span>. 越来越多的： <span word="a">a</span> <span word="increasing">increasing</span> <span word="number">number</span> 带来不好影： <span word="exercise">exercise</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="unpredictable">unpredictable</span>/ <span word="unforseable">unforseable</span> <span word="consequence">consequence</span> <span word="upon">upon</span> <span word="F">F</span>、正反论证 <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="difficult">difficult</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="imagine">imagine</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="simple">simple</span>, <span word="healthy">healthy</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="dynamic">dynamic</span>/ <span word="vibrant">vibrant</span>/ <span word="fantastic">fantastic</span>/ <span word="active">active</span>/ <span word="alive">alive</span>, <span word="without">without</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="probably">probably</span> <span word="pale">pale</span>. <span word="Hardly">Hardly</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="imagine">imagine</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fascination">fascination</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="G">G</span>、然而 <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="contrary">contrary</span>/ <span word="conversely">conversely</span>/ <span word="by">by</span> <span word="contrast">contrast</span> <span word="H">H</span>、利弊及其影响 利：<span word="merits">merits</span>/<span word="benefits">benefits</span>/<span word="advantage">advantage</span> 弊：<span word="drawbacks">drawbacks</span>/<span word="risks">risks</span>/<span word="disadvantage">disadvantage</span> 弊： <span word="exercise">exercise</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="unforseable">unforseable</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="unprediactable">unprediactable</span>/ <span word="adverse">adverse</span>/ <span word="unfavorable">unfavorable</span>/ <span word="deleterious">deleterious</span> <span word="consequence">consequence</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="undoubtedly">undoubtedly</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="undeniably">undeniably</span> <span word="sound">sound</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="alarm">alarm</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="sb">sb</span>. <span word="put">put</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="enormous">enormous</span> <span word="pressure">pressure</span> <span word="upon">upon</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="potential">potential</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="probable">probable</span> <span word="threat">threat</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="adversely">adversely</span> <span word="affect">affect</span> <span word="undermine">undermine</span> 利： 1. <span word="exercise">exercise</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="far">far</span>-<span word="reaching">reaching</span> <span word="influent">influent</span> <span word="on">on</span> 2.<span word="undoubtedly">undoubtedly</span> <span word="serves">serves</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="catalyst">catalyst</span>/<span word="enzyme">enzyme</span> <span word="for">for</span> 3. <span word="play">play</span> <span word="airreplaceable">airreplaceable</span>/<span word="crutial">crutial</span>/<span word="indispensable">indispensable</span> <span word="role">role</span> <span word="in">in</span> 4. <span word="lay">lay</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="solid">solid</span> <span word="foudation">foudation</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="As">As</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="vividly">vividly</span> <span word="shown">shown</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="picture">picture</span>,... ...相信大家对这句话都不会不熟悉吧？ 为什么所谓的模版用了会分数很低呢？ 一、因为全国人民都在用它。 二、大家都在用的话就看不出考生的真实水平了。 三、阅卷老师一遍又一遍的看难道不会烦？ 所以，这就是为什么用模版分数低的原因，也是为什么阅卷老师看到模版不愿意给分的一个因素。 而笔者这里所给出的并非纯粹的模版，而是在简单模版的基础上的更为新颖的表达方式，对于所谓模版，的确，用的人多了，老师就烦了，所以我们必须时刻自己总结出新颖的东西来避免。 而其中的方式之一就是使用更为高级的词汇和表达方式，说实话吧，在笔者的这个总结里，大部分的表达是雅思和托福作文表达，这样就能有效避免表达方式的雷同和词汇的陈旧。 写了这么相信大家应该能理解我想表达的意思，模版，没有统一的，没有固定不变的，只有不断更新和不断总结的新颖表达方式和词汇，这样的模版才是真正实用和能拿高分的模版。 最后，祝福大家都能运用好这个所谓的模版里的表达方式，在写作中拿下高分。 垃圾词汇的替代 1: <span word="help">help</span> 典型例句：<span word="Ill">Ill</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="you">you</span> 。 替代语 <span word="accommodate">accommodate</span>/<span word="assist">assist</span>/ <span word="avail">avail</span> <span word="E">E</span>.<span word="g">g</span>: <span word="Ill">Ill</span> <span word="endeavour">endeavour</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="accomodate">accomodate</span> <span word="you">you</span>。 2: <span word="helpful">helpful</span> 典型例句：<span word="Sth">Sth</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="helpful">helpful</span> 替代语 <span word="conducive">conducive</span>/ <span word="time">time</span>-<span word="honored">honored</span> 时代赋予的/ <span word="do">do</span> <span word="credit">credit</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="forbears">forbears</span> 继承先辈的优秀传统/ <span word="assisting">assisting</span> <span word="E">E</span>.<span word="g">g</span> <span word="Sth">Sth</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="conducive">conducive</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="sb">sb</span> 3: <span word="show">show</span> 典型例句：<span word="as">as</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="shows">shows</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="picture">picture</span> 替代语 <span word="betray">betray</span> 4: <span word="think">think</span> 典型例句： <span word="i">i</span> <span word="think">think</span> ---- ---- 替代语<span word="deem">deem</span> 5: <span word="ugly">ugly</span> 典型例句： <span word="xxx">xxx</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="ugly">ugly</span> 替代语 <span word="hideous">hideous</span> 6: <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="way">way</span> 典型例句： <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="way">way</span>,... 替代语 <span word="incidentally">incidentally</span>.... 7: <span word="because">because</span> 典型例句： <span word="xxx">xxx</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="xxx">xxx</span> 替代语 <span word="in">in</span> <span word="that">that</span>/<span word="in">in</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="E">E</span>.<span word="g">g</span>: <span word="xxx">xxx</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="xxx">xxx</span> 8: <span word="consider">consider</span> 典型例句： <span word="We">We</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="consider">consider</span> <span word="xxx">xxx</span> 替代语 <span word="allow">allow</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="E">E</span>.<span word="g">g</span> : <span word="We">We</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="allow">allow</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="xxx">xxx</span> 9: <span word="much">much</span> 典型例句： <span word="there">there</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="population">population</span> 替代语 <span word="there">there</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="drastic">drastic</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> ----- 10: <span word="about">about</span> 典型例句：<span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="about">about</span> 250 <span word="times">times</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="that">that</span> 替代语 <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="approximately">approximately</span> --- 11: <span word="buy">buy</span> 替代语<span word="purchase">purchase</span> 作文中的部分新颖表达及部分垃圾词汇的替代 考研英语作文要想拿高分，就必须有一些与众不同的词汇或表达方式，笔者在这里所说的垃圾词汇并没有贬低这些表达的意思，大家可以想象一个阅卷老师在阅几千份试卷的过程中就看到几千次相同表达，分数可想而知，所以如何取舍你懂的。</p>
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