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考研英语作文写作指导(一)

<p>  考研英语复习资料 考研英语作文写作指导  考研英语作文要想拿高分,就必须有一些与众不同的词汇或表达方式,笔者在这里所说的垃圾词汇并没有贬低这些表达的意思,大家可以想象一个阅卷老师在阅几千份试卷的过程中就看到几千次相同表达,分数可想而知,所以如何取舍你懂的。  一、文章结构用词表达  1.分点一:分层论证  <span word="Basic">Basic</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="understanding">understanding</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="from">from</span>_______ <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span>__________/ <span word="First">First</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="foremost">foremost</span>;  <span word="On">On</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>_________, <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>_________;  <span word="Besides">Besides</span>/ <span word="Whats">Whats</span> <span word="more">more</span>/ <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>;  <span word="First">First</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span>/<span word="to">to</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>/<span word="above">above</span> <span word="all">all</span>;  <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="second">second</span> <span word="place">place</span>/<span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="second">second</span> <span word="instance">instance</span>;  <span word="Last">Last</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="least">least</span>/<span word="in">in</span> <span word="summary">summary</span>;  这一段主要说理,在分论点里可以加一些小的例子细节,重点是要用一些精华句子!  2.分点二:举例论证  <span word="Further">Further</span> <span word="lending">lending</span> <span word="credence">credence</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span>____________ (简单阐述/例子字不够就多讲点废话)  /<span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="illustration">illustration</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="example">example</span> <span word="of">of</span>(典型例子)  / <span word="A">A</span> <span word="case">case</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span>(不是很典型)________,..<span word="some">some</span> <span word="expert">expert</span> <span word="pionts">pionts</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="that">that</span>...  /<span word="take">take</span> ... <span word="in">in</span> <span word="instance">instance</span>...  /<span word="according">according</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="investigation">investigation</span> <span word="conducted">conducted</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="indicates">indicates</span> <span word="that">that</span>.../  <span word="some">some</span> <span word="statistics">statistics</span> <span word="expose">expose</span> <span word="that">that</span>...  一句话总结例子:<span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span>,强调句/倒装句/表利弊的句型/反面论证如果没有会怎样。  3.让步段:  <span word="Agree">Agree</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="disagree">disagree</span>: <span word="Admittedly">Admittedly</span>,_____,<span word="to">to</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="extent">extent</span>, <span word="may">may</span> <span word="directly">directly</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="indirectly">indirectly</span> ____ /<span word="has">has</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="undeniable">undeniable</span> <span word="detriments">detriments</span>.  <span word="For">For</span> <span word="instance">instance</span>, _______  <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="valuable">valuable</span> <span word="merits">merits</span> <span word="of">of</span>_______ <span word="considerably">considerably</span> <span word="overshadow">overshadow</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="drawbacks">drawbacks</span>/ <span word="on">on</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="account">account</span>________./  (经典正反对比结构)  二选一:<span word="Admittedly">Admittedly</span>, <span word="BB">BB</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="certain">certain</span> <span word="merits">merits</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="deserve">deserve</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="words">words</span> <span word="here">here</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, ____  <span word="However">However</span>,<span word="BB">BB</span> 的缺点或<span word="AA">AA</span>也可以做到. <span word="Compared">Compared</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="AA">AA</span>, (<span word="which">which</span> 可以总结所有优点或针对<span word="BB">BB</span>的一方面, )<span word="it">it</span> <span word="pales">pales</span>.  4.结尾段:  <span word="Therefore">Therefore</span>, <span word="due">due</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="above">above</span> <span word="mentioned">mentioned</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="sometimes">sometimes</span> <span word="correlate">correlate</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="form">form</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="organic">organic</span> <span word="whole">whole</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="thus">thus</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="persuasive">persuasive</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="single">single</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="them">them</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="reinforce">reinforce</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="stand">stand</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="that">that</span>.  5.改写题目  <span word="Only">Only</span> <span word="via">via</span> ___<span word="can">can</span> <span word="we">we</span>__________;  <span word="only">only</span> <span word="via">via</span> ___<span word="can">can</span> <span word="we">we</span>________;  <span word="and">and</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="via">via</span>___<span word="can">can</span> <span word="we">we</span>_______  <span word="Or">Or</span>  <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="that">that</span>...;<span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="that">that</span>...;<span word="and">and</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="that">that</span>...(不好写或显得累赘就不要了)  二、语言结构用词表达  1.基本句型  <span word="A">A</span>.因果  <span word="On">On</span> <span word="account">account</span> <span word="of">of</span>/<span word="owing">owing</span> <span word="to">to</span>/<span word="due">due</span> <span word="to">to</span>+ <span word="N">N</span>  <span word="For">For</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="that">that</span>/<span word="as">as</span>/<span word="since">since</span>+句子  <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="due">due</span> <span word="to">to</span>____<span word="that">that</span>  <span word="eg">eg</span>:<span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="due">due</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="persistence">persistence</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="perseverance">perseverance</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="eventually">eventually</span> <span word="reached">reached</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="acme">acme</span>.  <span word="derive">derive</span>/<span word="arise">arise</span>/<span word="stem">stem</span> <span word="from">from</span>来源于  <span word="eg">eg</span>:<span word="His">His</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="derives">derives</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="persistence">persistence</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="perseverance">perseverance</span>.  <span word="ascribe">ascribe</span> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="B">B</span> 归结于  <span word="eg">eg</span>: <span word="His">His</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="ascribed">ascribed</span>/<span word="attributed">attributed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="persistence">persistence</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="perseverance">perseverance</span>  <span word="B">B</span>.条件  <span word="A">A</span> <span word="serves">serves</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="catalyst">catalyst</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="B">B</span>  <span word="If">If</span>/<span word="on">on</span> <span word="condition">condition</span> <span word="that">that</span>/<span word="provided">provided</span> <span word="that">that</span>/<span word="as">as</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="as">as</span>________  <span word="C">C</span>.让步  <span word="Despite">Despite</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="that">that</span>/<span word="regardless">regardless</span> <span word="of">of</span>  2.经典句型  <span word="A">A</span>.倒装  <span word="Only">Only</span> <span word="via">via</span> __<span word="do">do</span>/<span word="did">did</span>/<span word="can">can</span> <span word="we">we</span>__  <span word="eg">eg</span>: <span word="Only">Only</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="going">going</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="beach">beach</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Hawaii">Hawaii</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="aboutAmerican">aboutAmerican</span> <span word="typical">typical</span> <span word="type">type</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="spending">spending</span> <span word="leisure">leisure</span> <span word="time">time</span>.  <span word="Hardly">Hardly</span>/<span word="Seldom">Seldom</span>/<span word="Scarcely">Scarcely</span> <span word="can">can</span>__  <span word="eg">eg</span>: <span word="Hardly">Hardly</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="imagine">imagine</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="world">world</span>/<span word="our">our</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="without">without</span>/<span word="devoid">devoid</span> <span word="of">of</span>  <span word="So">So</span> +<span word="adj">adj</span>+主谓倒装+<span word="that">that</span>__  <span word="Not">Not</span> <span word="only">only</span> 主谓倒装 <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span>...  <span word="eg">eg</span>: <span word="Not">Not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="prepare">prepare</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="compete">compete</span>  <span word="Not">Not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="economic">economic</span> <span word="needs">needs</span>,<span word="they">they</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="meet">meet</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="spiritual">spiritual</span> <span word="needs">needs</span>.  <span word="On">On</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="account">account</span> 主谓倒装(决不....)  <span word="B">B</span>.强调  <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span>/<span word="was">was</span>....<span word="that">that</span>/<span word="who">who</span>....  限定性副词<span word="probably">probably</span>/<span word="directly">directly</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="indirectly">indirectly</span>/<span word="to">to</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="extent">extent</span>  3.经典中的经典  <span word="A">A</span>.排比  1)<span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="tourism">tourism</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="gives">gives</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="opportunity">opportunity</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="culture">culture</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="dynamic">dynamic</span>, <span word="robust">robust</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="alive">alive</span> <span word="country">country</span>.  2)<span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="computers">computers</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="diverse">diverse</span>,<span word="convenient">convenient</span>,<span word="dynamic">dynamic</span>/ <span word="vibrant">vibrant</span>, <span word="without">without</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="probably">probably</span> <span word="pale">pale</span>.  3)<span word="A">A</span>/<span word="which">which</span> <span word="needs">needs</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span>/<span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="way">way</span>, <span word="A">A</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="readily">readily</span> <span word="accepted">accepted</span>, <span word="respected">respected</span>,<span word="appreciated">appreciated</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="advocated">advocated</span>.  4)<span word="Only">Only</span> <span word="via">via</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="systematic">systematic</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="concerning">concerning</span> <span word="arts">arts</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="science">science</span>.  <span word="Only">Only</span> <span word="via">via</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="essence">essence</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="symbiosis">symbiosis</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="collaboration">collaboration</span>.  <span word="And">And</span> <span word="Only">Only</span> <span word="via">via</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="meet">meet</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="demands">demands</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="future">future</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="inevitable">inevitable</span>.</p>
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