考研英语小作文批改投诉信0-4分例文4
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> 0-4分</p><p> 第四篇</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="customer">customer</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="trouble">trouble</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="afraid">afraid</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="complaint">complaint</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="quality">quality</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="TV">TV</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="bought">bought</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="stores">stores</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="week">week</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="dissatisfaction">dissatisfaction</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="worst">worst</span> <span word="after">after</span>-<span word="sale">sale</span> <span word="service">service</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="place">place</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="saleswomans">saleswomans</span> <span word="attitude">attitude</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="extremely">extremely</span>. <span word="She">She</span> <span word="shouted">shouted</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="rudely">rudely</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="refused">refused</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="examine">examine</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="because">because</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="abnormal">abnormal</span> <span word="operation">operation</span> <span word="resulted">resulted</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="televisions">televisions</span> <span word="fault">fault</span>, <span word="she">she</span> <span word="said">said</span>.<span word="Under">Under</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="circumstances">circumstances</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="regretful">regretful</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="complaint">complaint</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="occur">occur</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="conveniences">conveniences</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="you">you</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="appreciate">appreciate</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="solve">solve</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problem">problem</span>, <span word="preferably">preferably</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="replace">replace</span> <span word="it">it</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="matter">matter</span> <span word="settled">settled</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="week">week</span>.</p><p> <span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reply">reply</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="customer">customer</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="trouble">trouble</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="afraid">afraid</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="complaint">complaint</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="quality">quality</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="TV">TV</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="had">had</span> (删除)<span word="bought">bought</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="stores">stores</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="week">week</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="dissatisfaction">dissatisfaction</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="worst">worst</span> <span word="after">after</span>-<span word="sale">sale</span> <span word="service">service</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="place">place</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="saleswomans">saleswomans</span> <span word="attitude">attitude</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="extremely">extremely</span>. <span word="She">She</span> <span word="shouted">shouted</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="rudely">rudely</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="refused">refused</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="examine">examine</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="because">because</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="abnormal">abnormal</span> <span word="operation">operation</span> <span word="resulted">resulted</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="televisions">televisions</span> <span word="fault">fault</span>, <span word="she">she</span> <span word="said">said</span>(这里应该再指出一个问题，而非第一个问题的论据).<span word="Under">Under</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="circumstances">circumstances</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="regretful">regretful</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="complaint">complaint</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="occur">occur</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="conveniences">conveniences</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="you">you</span>.</p>
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