考研英语小作文批改感谢信0-4分例文4
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> 0-4分</p><p> 第四篇</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Bob">Bob</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="extend">extend</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="sincere">sincere</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="warm">warm</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="process">process</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="seeking">seeking</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="conformed">conformed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="decades">decades</span> <span word="training">training</span>, <span word="after">after</span> <span word="i">i</span> <span word="graduated">graduated</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="peking">peking</span> <span word="university">university</span>.</p><p> <span word="If">If</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="assistance">assistance</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="recommendation">recommendation</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="prestigious">prestigious</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="China">China</span>. <span word="i">i</span> <span word="fear">fear</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="i">i</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="road">road</span> <span word="back">back</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="forth">forth</span> .<span word="i">i</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="appreciate">appreciate</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="precious">precious</span> <span word="opportunity">opportunity</span> ,<span word="which">which</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="offered">offered</span>. <span word="every">every</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="agrees">agrees</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="wrote">wrote</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="esteemed">esteemed</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="boss">boss</span>, <span word="regarding">regarding</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="qualifications">qualifications</span> ,<span word="education">education</span> <span word="back">back</span> -<span word="ground">ground</span> ,<span word="and">and</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="special">special</span> <span word="skills">skills</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="program">program</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="i">i</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="huge">huge</span> <span word="intrest">intrest</span> <span word="in">in</span>. <span word="Again">Again</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="warm">warm</span> <span word="thanks">thanks</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="you">you</span>! <span word="please">please</span> <span word="accept">accept</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span>.</p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Bob">Bob</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="extend">extend</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="sincere">sincere</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="warm">warm</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="process">process</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="seeking">seeking</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="conformed">conformed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="decades">decades</span> <span word="training">training</span>, <span word="after">after</span> <span word="i">i</span>(大写)<span word="graduated">graduated</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="peking">peking</span> <span word="university">university</span>.</p><p> <span word="If">If</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="assistance">assistance</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="recommendation">recommendation</span> (改为<span word="recommending">recommending</span>)<span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="prestigious">prestigious</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="China">China</span>. <span word="ifear">ifear</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="i">i</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="road">road</span> (中式英语)<span word="back">back</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="forth">forth</span> .<span word="i">i</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="appreciate">appreciate</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="precious">precious</span> <span word="oppotunity">oppotunity</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="offered">offered</span>. <span word="every">every</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="agrees">agrees</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="wrote">wrote</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="esteemed">esteemed</span> <span word="company">company</span>(删除) <span word="boss">boss</span>, <span word="regarding">regarding</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="qualifications">qualifications</span> ,<span word="education">education</span> <span word="back">back</span> -<span word="ground">ground</span> ,<span word="and">and</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="special">special</span> <span word="skills">skills</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="program">program</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="i">i</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="huge">huge</span> <span word="intrest">intrest</span> <span word="in">in</span>. <span word="Again">Again</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="warm">warm</span> <span word="thanks">thanks</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="you">you</span>! <span word="please">please</span>(首字母大写)<span word="accept">accept</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span>.</p>
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