考研英语小作文批改感谢信5-7分例文5
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> 5-7分</p><p> 第五篇</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Ms">Ms</span>. <span word="Wang">Wang</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="extend">extend</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="sincere">sincere</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="kindness">kindness</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="week">week</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="assistance">assistance</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="bringing">bringing</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="admission">admission</span> <span word="card">card</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="examination">examination</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="time">time</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="fear">fear</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="missed">missed</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="opportunity">opportunity</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="servant">servant</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="government">government</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="prepared">prepared</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="time">time</span>.</p><p> <span word="Every">Every</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="agrees">agrees</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="deliverer">deliverer</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="save">save</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="troublesome">troublesome</span> <span word="situation">situation</span>. <span word="Again">Again</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="warm">warm</span> <span word="thanks">thanks</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="you">you</span>! <span word="Please">Please</span> <span word="accept">accept</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Ms">Ms</span>. <span word="Wang">Wang</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="extend">extend</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="sincere">sincere</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="kindness">kindness</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="week">week</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="assistance">assistance</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="bringing">bringing</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="admission">admission</span> <span word="card">card</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="examination">examination</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="time">time</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="fear">fear</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="missed">missed</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="opportunity">opportunity</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="servant">servant</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="government">government</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="prepared">prepared</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="time">time</span>.</p><p> <span word="Every">Every</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="agrees">agrees</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="deliverer">deliverer</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="save">save</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="troublesome">troublesome</span> <span word="situation">situation</span>. <span word="Again">Again</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="warm">warm</span> <span word="thanks">thanks</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="you">you</span>! <span word="Please">Please</span> <span word="accept">accept</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 6分</p><p> 同学你好，写作文时要再认真一点，写完后再检查一遍，有些小错就可以及时改正，另外，建议你去看一下虚拟语气的句型。时态要保持一致。</p>
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