考研英语小作文批改感谢信0-4分例文2
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> 0-4分</p><p> 第二篇</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Bob">Bob</span>，</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="extend">extend</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="sincere">sincere</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="improve">improve</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="days">days</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="assistance">assistance</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="teaching">teaching</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="various">various</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="including">including</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="culture">culture</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="English">English</span>, <span word="Then">Then</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="practice">practice</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="face">face</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="face">face</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="fear">fear</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="seek">seek</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="learning">learning</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="help">help</span>.</p><p> <span word="Everyone">Everyone</span> <span word="agrees">agrees</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="warmly">warmly</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="pay">pay</span>. <span word="Again">Again</span>，<span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="warm">warm</span> <span word="thanks">thanks</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="you">you</span>! <span word="Please">Please</span> <span word="accept">accept</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span>.</p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Bob">Bob</span>，</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="extend">extend</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="sincere">sincere</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="improve">improve</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="days">days</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="assistance">assistance</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="teaching">teaching</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="various">various</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="including">including</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="culture">culture</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="English">English</span>, <span word="Then">Then</span>(删除) <span word="help">help</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="practice">practice</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="face">face</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="face">face</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="fear">fear</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="seek">seek</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="learning">learning</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="help">help</span>.(删除)</p><p> <span word="Every">Every</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="agrees">agrees</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="warmly">warmly</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="likelyto">likelyto</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="pay">pay</span>. <span word="Again">Again</span>，<span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="warm">warm</span> <span word="thanks">thanks</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="you">you</span>! <span word="Please">Please</span> <span word="accept">accept</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span>.</p><p> 4分</p><p> 同学你好，写完书信要有<span word="yours">yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span> 和 你的名字。英语的句号是.此外，建议你看一下关于强调句和虚拟语气的知识。</p>
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