考研英语小作文批改感谢信5-7分例文4
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> 5-7分</p><p> 第四篇</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="sir">sir</span>，</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="extend">extend</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="sincere">sincere</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="kindness">kindness</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="lend">lend</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="umbrella">umbrella</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="assistance">assistance</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="lending">lending</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="umbrella">umbrella</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="raining">raining</span>， <span word="I">I</span> <span word="fear">fear</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="trouble">trouble</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="home">home</span>.</p><p> <span word="Every">Every</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="agrees">agrees</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="helping">helping</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="trouble">trouble</span>. <span word="Again">Again</span>，<span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="warm">warm</span> <span word="thanks">thanks</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="you">you</span>! <span word="Please">Please</span> <span word="accept">accept</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="sir">sir</span>，</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="extend">extend</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="sincere">sincere</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="kindness">kindness</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="lend">lend</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="umbrella">umbrella</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="assistance">assistance</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="lending">lending</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="umbrella">umbrella</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="raining">raining</span>， <span word="I">I</span> <span word="fear">fear</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="trouble">trouble</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="home">home</span>.</p><p> <span word="Every">Every</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="agrees">agrees</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="helping">helping</span>(改为 <span word="helped">helped</span>) <span word="others">others</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="trouble">trouble</span>. <span word="Again">Again</span>，<span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="warm">warm</span> <span word="thanks">thanks</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="you">you</span>! <span word="Please">Please</span> <span word="accept">accept</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>(加逗号)</p><p> 加名字</p><p> 5分</p><p> 小作文的字数要求是100词，不要少于100词，否则是要扣分的。书信的写作格式要牢记于心。要注意时态的一致性。虽然作文没有什么大问题，但内容过于简单，其实你可以把内容再扩充一下，用一些高级的词汇和句型。</p>
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