考研英语小作文批改感谢信0-4分例文3
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> 0-4分</p><p> 第三篇</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Bob">Bob</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="extend">extend</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="sincere">sincere</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="learning">learning</span> <span word="English">English</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="assistance">assistance</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="variety">variety</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="activities">activities</span> <span word="including">including</span> <span word="holding">holding</span> <span word="funny">funny</span> <span word="discussions">discussions</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="me">me</span>, <span word="teaching">teaching</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="singing">singing</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="songs">songs</span>, <span word="playing">playing</span> <span word="simple">simple</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="games">games</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="on">on</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="fear">fear</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="searching">searching</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="wrong">wrong</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="difficult">difficult</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="feeling">feeling</span> <span word="unhappy">unhappy</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="it">it</span>.</p><p> <span word="Every">Every</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="agrees">agrees</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="opportunities">opportunities</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="speak">speak</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="loudly">loudly</span>, <span word="beacuse">beacuse</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="shy">shy</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="talk">talk</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="English">English</span>. <span word="Your">Your</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="raise">raise</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="level">level</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="proficiency">proficiency</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="English">English</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="now">now</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="enjoy">enjoy</span> <span word="greatest">greatest</span> <span word="interst">interst</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="listening">listening</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="writing">writing</span>.</p><p> <span word="Again">Again</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="warm">warm</span> <span word="thanks">thanks</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="you">you</span>! <span word="Please">Please</span> <span word="accept">accept</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Bob">Bob</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="extend">extend</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="sincere">sincere</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="give">give</span>(改为<span word="gave">gave</span>) <span word="me">me</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="learning">learning</span> <span word="English">English</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="assistance">assistance</span> <span word="in">in</span> (<span word="in">in</span> 后面要加<span word="doing">doing</span> <span word="sth">sth</span>.)<span word="a">a</span> <span word="variety">variety</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="activities">activities</span> <span word="including">including</span> <span word="holding">holding</span> <span word="funny">funny</span> <span word="discussions">discussions</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="me">me</span>, <span word="teaching">teaching</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="singing">singing</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="songs">songs</span>,(加<span word="and">and</span>) <span word="playing">playing</span> <span word="simple">simple</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="games">games</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="on">on</span>(删除), <span word="I">I</span> <span word="fear">fear</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="searching">searching</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="wrong">wrong</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="difficult">difficult</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="feeling">feeling</span> <span word="unhappy">unhappy</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="it">it</span>.</p>
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