考研英语小作文批改求职信0-4分例文2
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> 0-4分</p><p> 第二篇</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="sir">sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="madam">madam</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="secretary">secretary</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Beijing">Beijing</span> <span word="University">University</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="Business">Business</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="June">June</span> 2013.<span word="Because">Because</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="major">major</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="studying">studying</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="time">time</span>. <span word="Now">Now</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="communication">communication</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="foreigner">foreigner</span> <span word="fluently">fluently</span>. <span word="Also">Also</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="test">test</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="Majors">Majors</span>-<span word="Brand">Brand</span> <span word="eight">eight</span>. <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="national">national</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="test">test</span> <span word="brand">brand</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="enter">enter</span> <span word="university">university</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="skilled">skilled</span> <span word="operate">operate</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="majority">majority</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="office">office</span> <span word="software">software</span>.</p><p> <span word="Please">Please</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="a">a</span>(改为<span word="an">an</span>) <span word="interview">interview</span>. <span word="Connect">Connect</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="number">number</span> 123456.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reply">reply</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="sir">sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="madam">madam</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writting">writting</span>(拼写错误，改为<span word="writing">writing</span>) <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span>(删除) <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="of">of</span>(改为<span word="as">as</span>) <span word="secretary">secretary</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Beijing">Beijing</span> <span word="University">University</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="Business">Business</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="June">June</span> 2013.<span word="Because">Because</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="major">major</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="studying">studying</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="time">time</span>. <span word="Now">Now</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="comunication">comunication</span>(改为<span word="communicate">communicate</span>)<span word="with">with</span> <span word="foreigner">foreigner</span> <span word="fluently">fluently</span>. <span word="Also">Also</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="past">past</span>(改为<span word="passed">passed</span>) <span word="the">the</span> <span word="test">test</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="Majors">Majors</span>-<span word="Brand">Brand</span> <span word="eight">eight</span>. <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="national">national</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="test">test</span> <span word="brand">brand</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="enter">enter</span> <span word="university">university</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="skilled">skilled</span> <span word="operate">operate</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="majority">majority</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="office">office</span> <span word="software">software</span>.</p>
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