考研英语小作文批改感谢信8-10分例文2
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> 8-10分</p><p> 第二篇</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Eleven">Eleven</span>，</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="extend">extend</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="sincere">sincere</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="encouragement">encouragement</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="me">me</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="assistance">assistance</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="Olympic">Olympic</span> <span word="Game">Game</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Maths">Maths</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="fear">fear</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="early">early</span>.</p><p> <span word="Every">Every</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="agrees">agrees</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="encouraged">encouraged</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="persist">persist</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="game">game</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="helped">helped</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="preparations">preparations</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="game">game</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="confidence">confidence</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="myself">myself</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="won">won</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="game">game</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="last">last</span>. <span word="Again">Again</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="warm">warm</span> <span word="thanks">thanks</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="you">you</span>! <span word="Please">Please</span> <span word="accept">accept</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Eleven">Eleven</span>，</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="extend">extend</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="sincere">sincere</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="encouragement">encouragement</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="me">me</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="assistance">assistance</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> (加上<span word="study">study</span> <span word="of">of</span>)<span word="Olympic">Olympic</span> <span word="Game">Game</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Maths">Maths</span>(奥数是<span word="Mathematic">Mathematic</span> <span word="Olympiad">Olympiad</span> ). <span word="I">I</span> <span word="fear">fear</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="give">give</span>(改为<span word="giving">giving</span>) <span word="it">it</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="early">early</span>.</p><p> <span word="Every">Every</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="agrees">agrees</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="encouraged">encouraged</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="persist">persist</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="game">game</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="helped">helped</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="preparations">preparations</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="game">game</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="confidence">confidence</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="myself">myself</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="won">won</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="game">game</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="last">last</span>. <span word="Again">Again</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="warm">warm</span> <span word="thanks">thanks</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="you">you</span>! <span word="Please">Please</span> <span word="accept">accept</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 8分</p>
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