考研英语小作文批改感谢信8-10分例文1
<p> 8-10分</p><p> 第一篇</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Tommy">Tommy</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="extend">extend</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="sincere">sincere</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="timely">timely</span> <span word="returning">returning</span> <span word="admission">admission</span> <span word="ticket">ticket</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="me">me</span>.</p><p> <span word="If">If</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="assistance">assistance</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="warmheartedly">warmheartedly</span> <span word="picking">picking</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="admission">admission</span> <span word="ticket">ticket</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="getting">getting</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="back">back</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="me">me</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="fear">fear</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="missed">missed</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="law">law</span> <span word="exam">exam</span> <span word="held">held</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="once">once</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="year">year</span>.</p><p> <span word="Every">Every</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="agrees">agrees</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="came">came</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="saved">saved</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="trouble">trouble</span>. <span word="Again">Again</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="warm">warm</span> <span word="thanks">thanks</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="you">you</span>! <span word="Please">Please</span> <span word="accept">accept</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Jane">Jane</span> <span word="Yang">Yang</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Tommy">Tommy</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="extend">extend</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="sincere">sincere</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="timely">timely</span> <span word="returning">returning</span> <span word="admission">admission</span> <span word="ticket">ticket</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="me">me</span>.</p><p> <span word="If">If</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="assistance">assistance</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="warmheartedly">warmheartedly</span> <span word="picking">picking</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="admission">admission</span> <span word="ticket">ticket</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="getting">getting</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="back">back</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="me">me</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="fear">fear</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="missed">missed</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="law">law</span> <span word="exam">exam</span> <span word="held">held</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="once">once</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="year">year</span>.</p><p> <span word="Every">Every</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="agrees">agrees</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="came">came</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="saved">saved</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="trouble">trouble</span>. <span word="Again">Again</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="warm">warm</span> <span word="thanks">thanks</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="you">you</span>! <span word="Please">Please</span> <span word="accept">accept</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Jane">Jane</span> <span word="Yang">Yang</span></p><p> 8分</p><p> 同学你好，作文写的很不错，但是要注意虚拟语气的用法，建议再复习一下。</p><p> </p>
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