考研英语小作文批改感谢信5-7分例文2
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> 5-7分</p><p> 第二篇：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Bob">Bob</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="extend">extend</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="sincere">sincere</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="warm">warm</span> <span word="reception">reception</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="travel">travel</span> <span word="abroad">abroad</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="assistance">assistance</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="traveling">traveling</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="guide">guide</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="me">me</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="fear">fear</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="lost">lost</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="coming">coming</span> <span word="back">back</span>.</p><p> <span word="Everyone">Everyone</span> <span word="agrees">agrees</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="patiently">patiently</span> <span word="guide">guide</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="tourist">tourist</span> <span word="attractions">attractions</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="explain">explain</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="peculiar">peculiar</span> <span word="stories">stories</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="sceneries">sceneries</span>. <span word="Again">Again</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="warm">warm</span> <span word="thanks">thanks</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="you">you</span>! <span word="Please">Please</span> <span word="accept">accept</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Bob">Bob</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="extend">extend</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="sincere">sincere</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="warm">warm</span> <span word="reception">reception</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="travel">travel</span> (改为<span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="journey">journey</span>)<span word="abroad">abroad</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="assistance">assistance</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="traveling">traveling</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="guide">guide</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="me">me</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="fear">fear</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="lost">lost</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="coming">coming</span> <span word="back">back</span>.</p><p> <span word="Every">Every</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="agrees">agrees</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="patiently">patiently</span> <span word="guide">guide</span>(改为<span word="guided">guided</span>) <span word="me">me</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="tourist">tourist</span> <span word="attractions">attractions</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="explain">explain</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="peculiar">peculiar</span> <span word="stories">stories</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="sceneries">sceneries</span>. <span word="Again">Again</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="warm">warm</span> <span word="thanks">thanks</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="you">you</span>! <span word="Please">Please</span> <span word="accept">accept</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 6分</p><p> 同学你好，作文写的还不错，但应保持时态的前后一致以及固定搭配。</p>
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