考研英语小作文批改投诉信5-7分例文5
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> 5-7分</p><p> 第五篇</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="Peking">Peking</span> <span word="University">University</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="trouble">trouble</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="afraid">afraid</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="complaint">complaint</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="accommodation">accommodation</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="dissatisfaction">dissatisfaction</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="roommates">roommates</span> <span word="inconsiderate">inconsiderate</span> <span word="behavior">behavior</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="place">place</span>, <span word="his">his</span> <span word="friends">friends</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="constantly">constantly</span> <span word="visiting">visiting</span> <span word="him">him</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="regularly">regularly</span> <span word="holds">holds</span> <span word="noisy">noisy</span> <span word="parties">parties</span>. <span word="Under">Under</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="circumstances">circumstances</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="inconvenient">inconvenient</span> <span word="tome">tome</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="rest">rest</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="dormitory">dormitory</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="appreciate">appreciate</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="single">single</span> <span word="room">room</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="me">me</span>，<span word="preferably">preferably</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="building">building</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="near">near</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="campus">campus</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="possible">possible</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="matter">matter</span> <span word="settled">settled</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="semester">semester</span>.</p><p> <span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="hearing">hearing</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="soon">soon</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="Sincerely">Sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="Peking">Peking</span> <span word="University">University</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="trouble">trouble</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="afraid">afraid</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="complaint">complaint</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="accommodation">accommodation</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="dissatisfaction">dissatisfaction</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="roommates">roommates</span> <span word="inconsiderate">inconsiderate</span> <span word="behavior">behavior</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="place">place</span>, <span word="his">his</span> <span word="friends">friends</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="constantly">constantly</span> <span word="visiting">visiting</span> <span word="him">him</span>.<span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="regularly">regularly</span> <span word="holds">holds</span> <span word="noisy">noisy</span> <span word="parties">parties</span>. <span word="Under">Under</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="circumstances">circumstances</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="inconvenient">inconvenient</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="rest">rest</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="dormitory">dormitory</span>.</p>
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