考研英语小作文批改感谢信0-4分例文1
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> 0-4分</p><p> 第一篇</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Elle">Elle</span>，</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="extend">extend</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="sincere">sincere</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="gave">gave</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="party">party</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="Sunday">Sunday</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="assistance">assistance</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="lend">lend</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="beautiful">beautiful</span> <span word="dress">dress</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="fear">fear</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="appearing">appearing</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="once">once</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="campus">campus</span> <span word="dancing">dancing</span> <span word="party">party</span>.</p><p> <span word="Everyone">Everyone</span> <span word="agrees">agrees</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="generously">generously</span> <span word="offered">offered</span> <span word="dress">dress</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="me">me</span>. <span word="Again">Again</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="warm">warm</span> <span word="thanks">thanks</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="you">you</span>! <span word="Please">Please</span> <span word="accept">accept</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Elle">Elle</span>，</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="extend">extend</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="sincere">sincere</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="gave">gave</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="help">help</span>(<span word="for">for</span> 后面不能加句子，可改为<span word="your">your</span> <span word="help">help</span>) <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="party">party</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="Sunday">Sunday</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="assistance">assistance</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="lend">lend</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="beautiful">beautiful</span> <span word="dress">dress</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="fear">fear</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="appearing">appearing</span> (<span word="appeared">appeared</span>)<span word="in">in</span> <span word="once">once</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="campus">campus</span> <span word="dancing">dancing</span> <span word="party">party</span>.</p><p> <span word="Every">Every</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="agrees">agrees</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="generously">generously</span> <span word="offered">offered</span> <span word="dress">dress</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="me">me</span>. <span word="Again">Again</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="warm">warm</span> <span word="thanks">thanks</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="you">you</span>! <span word="Please">Please</span> <span word="accept">accept</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 2分</p><p> 同学你好，第一段的最后一句话中，由于没有写<span word="not">not</span>,使文章的意思完全相反，因此，一定要好好研究一下虚拟语气的用法。另外，<span word="for">for</span> 后面是不能加句子的。</p>
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