考研英语小作文批改投诉信8-10分例文2
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> 8-10分</p><p> 第二篇</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="freshman">freshman</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="college">college</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="trouble">trouble</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="afraid">afraid</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="complaint">complaint</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="service">service</span> <span word="rendered">rendered</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="flat">flat</span> <span word="apartments">apartments</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="dissatisfaction">dissatisfaction</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="lacking">lacking</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span> <span word="amenities">amenities</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="daliy">daliy</span> <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="place">place</span>, <span word="just">just</span> <span word="taking">taking</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="warm">warm</span> <span word="shower">shower</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="seems">seems</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="impossible">impossible</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="weather">weather</span> <span word="gets">gets</span> <span word="colder">colder</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="before">before</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="even">even</span> <span word="scarcely">scarcely</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="hot">hot</span> <span word="drinking">drinking</span> <span word="water">water</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="provided">provided</span> <span word="continously">continously</span>. <span word="Under">Under</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="circumstances">circumstances</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="dismal">dismal</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="everything">everything</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="night">night</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="appreciate">appreciate</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="pay">pay</span> <span word="prompt">prompt</span> <span word="attention">attention</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problems">problems</span>, <span word="preferably">preferably</span> <span word="solve">solve</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="soon">soon</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="possible">possible</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="matter">matter</span> <span word="settled">settled</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="winter">winter</span> <span word="around">around</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="corner">corner</span>.</p><p> <span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reply">reply</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>，</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="freshman">freshman</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="college">college</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="trouble">trouble</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="afraid">afraid</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="complaint">complaint</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="service">service</span> <span word="rendered">rendered</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="flat">flat</span> <span word="apartments">apartments</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="dissatisfaction">dissatisfaction</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="lacking">lacking</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span> <span word="amenities">amenities</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="daliy">daliy</span>(拼写错误，改为<span word="daily">daily</span>) <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="place">place</span>, <span word="just">just</span> <span word="taking">taking</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="warm">warm</span> <span word="shower">shower</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="seems">seems</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="impossible">impossible</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="weather">weather</span> <span word="gets">gets</span> <span word="colder">colder</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="before">before</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="even">even</span> <span word="scarcely">scarcely</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="hot">hot</span> <span word="drinking">drinking</span> <span word="water">water</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="provided">provided</span> <span word="continously">continously</span>. <span word="Under">Under</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="circumstances">circumstances</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="dismal">dismal</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="everything">everything</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="night">night</span>.</p>
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