考研英语小作文批改投诉信5-7分例文2
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> 5-7分</p><p> 第二篇</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="buyer">buyer</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="online">online</span> <span word="store">store</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="bought">bought</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="mobile">mobile</span> <span word="phone">phone</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="week">week</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="trouble">trouble</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="afraid">afraid</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="complaint">complaint</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="short">short</span> <span word="period">period</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="time">time</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="dissatisfaction">dissatisfaction</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unconvenience">unconvenience</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="stand">stand</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="place">place</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="buttery">buttery</span> <span word="needs">needs</span> <span word="recharging">recharging</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="using">using</span> <span word="mere">mere</span> <span word="four">four</span> <span word="hours">hours</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="charger">charger</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="while">while</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="buttom">buttom</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="small">small</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="nearly">nearly</span> <span word="difficult">difficult</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="type">type</span> <span word="anything">anything</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="them">them</span>. <span word="Under">Under</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="circumstances">circumstances</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="hard">hard</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="life">life</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="appreciate">appreciate</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="change">change</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="phone">phone</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="works">works</span> <span word="well">well</span>, <span word="preferably">preferably</span> <span word="receive">receive</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="refund">refund</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="it">it</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="matter">matter</span> <span word="settled">settled</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="within">within</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="week">week</span>.</p><p> <span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reply">reply</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="buyer">buyer</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="online">online</span> <span word="store">store</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="bought">bought</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="mobile">mobile</span> <span word="phone">phone</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="week">week</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="trouble">trouble</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="afraid">afraid</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="complaint">complaint</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="use">use</span>(改为<span word="using">using</span>) <span word="it">it</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="short">short</span> <span word="period">period</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="time">time</span>.</p>
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