考研英语小作文批改求职信8-10分例文1
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> 8-10分</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="read">read</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="advertisement">advertisement</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="magazine">magazine</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="searchingI">searchingI</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="sales">sales</span> <span word="manager">manager</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="understand">understand</span> <span word="efficient">efficient</span> <span word="marketing">marketing</span> <span word="strategy">strategy</span> .<span word="My">My</span> <span word="communication">communication</span> <span word="skills">skills</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="described">described</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="enclosed">enclosed</span> <span word="resume">resume</span>, <span word="are">are</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="suited">suited</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="conditions">conditions</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="advertisement">advertisement</span> .<span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="recent">recent</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Beijing">Beijing</span> <span word="University">University</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="bachelor">bachelor</span> <span word="degree">degree</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="marketing">marketing</span> <span word="management">management</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="having">having</span> <span word="taken">taken</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="broad">broad</span> <span word="range">range</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="courses">courses</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="served">served</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="salesman">salesman</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="ABC">ABC</span> <span word="Company">Company</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="spare">spare</span> <span word="time">time</span>. .</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="happy">happy</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="meet">meet</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="convenience">convenience</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="discuss">discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="match">match</span>. <span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>，</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span> ,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="read">read</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="advertisement">advertisement</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="magazine">magazine</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="searching">searching</span> (加逗号)<span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="sales">sales</span> <span word="manager">manager</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="understand">understand</span> <span word="efficient">efficient</span> <span word="marketing">marketing</span> <span word="strategy">strategy</span> .<span word="My">My</span> <span word="communication">communication</span> <span word="skills">skills</span>(去掉<span word="s">s</span>), <span word="as">as</span> <span word="described">described</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="enclosed">enclosed</span> <span word="resume">resume</span>, <span word="are">are</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="suited">suited</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="conditions">conditions</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="advertisement">advertisement</span> .<span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="recent">recent</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Beijing">Beijing</span> <span word="University">University</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="bachelor">bachelor</span> <span word="degree">degree</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="marketing">marketing</span> <span word="management">management</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="having">having</span> <span word="taken">taken</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="broad">broad</span> <span word="range">range</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="courses">courses</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="served">served</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="salesman">salesman</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="ABC">ABC</span> <span word="Company">Company</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="spare">spare</span> <span word="time">time</span>. .</p>
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