考研英语小作文批改投诉信0-4分例文2
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> 0-4分</p><p> 第二篇</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sales">Sales</span> <span word="Manager">Manager</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="senior">senior</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Computer">Computer</span> <span word="Science">Science</span> <span word="Department">Department</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Fudan">Fudan</span> <span word="University">University</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="trouble">trouble</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="afraid">afraid</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="complaint">complaint</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="book">book</span> <span word="Practical">Practical</span> <span word="Writing">Writing</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="NETEM">NETEM</span> <span word="bought">bought</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="bookstore">bookstore</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="week">week</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="dissatisfaction">dissatisfaction</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="exert">exert</span> <span word="amount">amount</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="obvious">obvious</span> <span word="faults">faults</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="book">book</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fist">fist</span> <span word="place">place</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="explanation">explanation</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="analysis">analysis</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="portion">portion</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="reading">reading</span> <span word="comprehension">comprehension</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="shown">shown</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="uncertain">uncertain</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="cause">cause</span> <span word="easily">easily</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="mistakes">mistakes</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="mind">mind</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="owing">owing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="follow">follow</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="standard">standard</span> <span word="form">form</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="print">print</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="words">words</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="sentences">sentences</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="clearly">clearly</span> <span word="identified">identified</span>. <span word="Under">Under</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="circumstances">circumstances</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="worse">worse</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="waste">waste</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="valuable">valuable</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="energy">energy</span></p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="appreciate">appreciate</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="returned">returned</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="book">book</span>, <span word="preferably">preferably</span> <span word="refund">refund</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="money">money</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="matter">matter</span> <span word="settled">settled</span> <span word="within">within</span> <span word="seven">seven</span> <span word="days">days</span>.</p><p> <span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reply">reply</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sales">Sales</span> <span word="Manager">Manager</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="senior">senior</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Computer">Computer</span> <span word="Science">Science</span> <span word="Department">Department</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Fudan">Fudan</span> <span word="University">University</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="trouble">trouble</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="afraid">afraid</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="complaint">complaint</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="book">book</span> <span word="Practical">Practical</span> <span word="Writing">Writing</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="NETEM">NETEM</span> <span word="bought">bought</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="bookstore">bookstore</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="week">week</span>.</p>
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