考研英语小作文批改投诉信5-7分例文1
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> 5-7分</p><p> 第一篇</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span>/<span word="Madam">Madam</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="collage">collage</span> <span word="sophomore">sophomore</span> <span word="tenant">tenant</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Room">Room</span> 388 <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Dorm">Dorm</span>-<span word="building">building</span> 5. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="trouble">trouble</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="afraid">afraid</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="complaint">complaint</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="dorm">dorm</span> <span word="management">management</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="dissatisfaction">dissatisfaction</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="management">management</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="environment">environment</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="place">place</span>, <span word="our">our</span> <span word="dormitory">dormitory</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="limited">limited</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="electricity">electricity</span>，<span word="the">the</span> <span word="lights">lights</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="turn">turn</span> <span word="off">off</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="midnight">midnight</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="strangers">strangers</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="freely">freely</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="inquiries">inquiries</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="checks">checks</span>. <span word="Under">Under</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="circumstances">circumstances</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="difficult">difficult</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="bring">bring</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="comfortable">comfortable</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="safe">safe</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="life">life</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="appreciate">appreciate</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="tighten">tighten</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="management">management</span>, <span word="preferably">preferably</span> <span word="You">You</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rules">rules</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="regulations">regulations</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="strictly">strictly</span> <span word="executed">executed</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="matter">matter</span> <span word="settled">settled</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="month">month</span>. <span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reply">reply</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span>/<span word="Madam">Madam</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="collage">collage</span> (删除<span word="college">college</span>)<span word="sophomore">sophomore</span> <span word="tenant">tenant</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Room">Room</span> 388 <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Dorm">Dorm</span>-<span word="building">building</span> 5. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="trouble">trouble</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="afraid">afraid</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="complaint">complaint</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="dorm">dorm</span> <span word="management">management</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="dissatisfaction">dissatisfaction</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="management">management</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="environment">environment</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="place">place</span>, <span word="our">our</span> <span word="dormitory">dormitory</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="limited">limited</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="electricity">electricity</span> (改为<span word="power">power</span> <span word="rationing">rationing</span>, 如果你不知道该如何表达宿舍晚上不限电，那么你可以不写这一句，直接说灯一直是开着的就可以了)，<span word="the">the</span> <span word="lights">lights</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="turn">turn</span> <span word="off">off</span>(,<span word="turn">turn</span> <span word="off">off</span> 的主语是人，可改为<span word="on">on</span>) <span word="at">at</span> <span word="midnight">midnight</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="strangers">strangers</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="freely">freely</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="inquiries">inquiries</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="checks">checks</span>. <span word="Under">Under</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="circumstances">circumstances</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="difficult">difficult</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="bring">bring</span> <span word="me">me</span> (加<span word="a">a</span>)<span word="comfortable">comfortable</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="safe">safe</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="life">life</span>.</p>
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