考研英语小作文批改求职信8-10分例文2
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> 8-10分</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Mr">Mr</span>. <span word="Yu">Yu</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="read">read</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="advertisement">advertisement</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="job">job</span>-<span word="hunting">hunting</span> <span word="website">website</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="recruiting">recruiting</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="positions">positions</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="company">company</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="software">software</span> <span word="engineer">engineer</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="understand">understand</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="essential">essential</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="master">master</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="solid">solid</span> <span word="foundation">foundation</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="science">science</span>. <span word="My">My</span> <span word="professional">professional</span> <span word="skills">skills</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="described">described</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="enclosed">enclosed</span> <span word="resume">resume</span>, <span word="are">are</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="suited">suited</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="requirement">requirement</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="recent">recent</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Peking">Peking</span> <span word="University">University</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="bachelor">bachelor</span> <span word="degree">degree</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Computer">Computer</span> <span word="Science">Science</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="having">having</span> <span word="taken">taken</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="broad">broad</span> <span word="range">range</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="courses">courses</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="served">served</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="intern">intern</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="attained">attained</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="fair">fair</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="happy">happy</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="meet">meet</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="convenience">convenience</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="discuss">discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="match">match</span>. <span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Mr">Mr</span>. <span word="Yu">Yu</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="read">read</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="advertisement">advertisement</span> <span word="in">in</span>(改为<span word="on">on</span>) <span word="job">job</span>-<span word="hunting">hunting</span> <span word="website">website</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="recruiting">recruiting</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="positions">positions</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="company">company</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="software">software</span> <span word="engineer">engineer</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="understand">understand</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="essential">essential</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="master">master</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="solid">solid</span> <span word="foundation">foundation</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="science">science</span>. <span word="My">My</span> <span word="professional">professional</span> <span word="skills">skills</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="described">described</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="enclosed">enclosed</span> <span word="resume">resume</span>, <span word="are">are</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="suited">suited</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="requirement">requirement</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="recent">recent</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Peking">Peking</span> <span word="University">University</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="bachelor">bachelor</span> <span word="degree">degree</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Computer">Computer</span> <span word="Science">Science</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="having">having</span> <span word="taken">taken</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="broad">broad</span> <span word="range">range</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="courses">courses</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="served">served</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="intern">intern</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="attained">attained</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="fair">fair</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>.</p>
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