考研英语小作文批改投诉信5-7分例文3
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> 5-7分</p><p> 第三篇</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="shop">shop</span> <span word="assistant">assistant</span>，</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="extend">extend</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="sincere">sincere</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="taken">taken</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="wallet">wallet</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="assistance">assistance</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="putting">putting</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="inform">inform</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="searching">searching</span> <span word="carefully">carefully</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="comers">comers</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="shop">shop</span>， <span word="I">I</span> <span word="fear">fear</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="lost">lost</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="hundred">hundred</span> <span word="yuan">yuan</span>。</p><p> <span word="Every">Every</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="agrees">agrees</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="enthusiastic">enthusiastic</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="friendly">friendly</span> ,<span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="helping">helping</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="elder">elder</span> <span word="customers">customers</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="carry">carry</span> <span word="goods">goods</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="cars">cars</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="caser">caser</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="lost">lost</span> <span word="things">things</span>. <span word="Again">Again</span>，<span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="warm">warm</span> <span word="thanks">thanks</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="you">you</span>! <span word="Please">Please</span> <span word="accept">accept</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span></p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="shop">shop</span> <span word="assistant">assistant</span>，</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="extend">extend</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="sincere">sincere</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="taken">taken</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="last">last</span>(拼写错误，<span word="lost">lost</span>) <span word="wallet">wallet</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="assistance">assistance</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="putting">putting</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="inform">inform</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="searching">searching</span> <span word="carefully">carefully</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="comers">comers</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="shop">shop</span>， <span word="I">I</span> <span word="fear">fear</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="lost">lost</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="hundred">hundred</span> <span word="yuan">yuan</span>。</p><p> <span word="Every">Every</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="agrees">agrees</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="enthusiastic">enthusiastic</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="friendly">friendly</span> ,<span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="helping">helping</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="elder">elder</span> <span word="customers">customers</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="carry">carry</span> <span word="goods">goods</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="cars">cars</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="caser">caser</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="lost">lost</span> <span word="things">things</span>. <span word="Again">Again</span>，<span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="warm">warm</span> <span word="thanks">thanks</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="you">you</span>! <span word="Please">Please</span> <span word="accept">accept</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span>.</p>
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