考研英语小作文批改求职信5-7分例文2
<p> 考研英语待批改作文：</p><p> 5-7分</p><p> 第二篇</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="read">read</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="advertisement">advertisement</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="yesterdays">yesterdays</span> <span word="China">China</span> <span word="Daily">Daily</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="recruitment">recruitment</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="corporation">corporation</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="manager">manager</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="understand">understand</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="longing">longing</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="highly">highly</span>-<span word="qualified">qualified</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="process">process</span> <span word="excellent">excellent</span> <span word="skills">skills</span>, <span word="teamwork">teamwork</span> <span word="spirit">spirit</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="rich">rich</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="competent">competent</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="meet">meet</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="requirement">requirement</span>. <span word="My">My</span> <span word="professional">professional</span> <span word="skills">skills</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="described">described</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="enclosed">enclosed</span> <span word="resume">resume</span>, <span word="are">are</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="suit">suit</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="expectation">expectation</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="recent">recent</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Sun">Sun</span> <span word="Yet">Yet</span>-<span word="sen">sen</span> <span word="University">University</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="bachorlors">bachorlors</span> <span word="degree">degree</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Business">Business</span> <span word="Administration">Administration</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="having">having</span> <span word="taken">taken</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="broad">broad</span> <span word="range">range</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="courses">courses</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="served">served</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="staff">staff</span> <span word="assistant">assistant</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="China">China</span> <span word="telecom">telecom</span>, <span word="where">where</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="practical">practical</span> <span word="skills">skills</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="rapidly">rapidly</span> <span word="cultivated">cultivated</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="quickly">quickly</span> <span word="developed">developed</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="happy">happy</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="meet">meet</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="convenience">convenience</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="discuss">discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="match">match</span>. <span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="sincerely">sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p><p> 考研英语作文批改点评如下：</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="read">read</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="advertisement">advertisement</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="yesterdays">yesterdays</span> <span word="China">China</span> <span word="Daily">Daily</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="recruitment">recruitment</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="corporation">corporation</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="manager">manager</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="understand">understand</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="longing">longing</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="highly">highly</span>-<span word="qualified">qualified</span>(改为<span word="high">high</span>-<span word="qualified">qualified</span>) <span word="individuals">individuals</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="process">process</span> <span word="excellent">excellent</span> <span word="skills">skills</span>, <span word="teamwork">teamwork</span> <span word="spirit">spirit</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="rich">rich</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="competent">competent</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="meet">meet</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="requirement">requirement</span>. <span word="My">My</span> <span word="professional">professional</span> <span word="skills">skills</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="described">described</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="enclosed">enclosed</span> <span word="resume">resume</span>, <span word="are">are</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="suit">suit</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="expectation">expectation</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="recent">recent</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Sun">Sun</span> <span word="Yet">Yet</span>-<span word="sen">sen</span> <span word="University">University</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="bachorlors">bachorlors</span> <span word="degree">degree</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Business">Business</span> <span word="Administration">Administration</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="having">having</span> <span word="taken">taken</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="broad">broad</span> <span word="range">range</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="courses">courses</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="served">served</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="staff">staff</span> <span word="assistant">assistant</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="China">China</span> <span word="telecom">telecom</span>, <span word="where">where</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="practical">practical</span> <span word="skills">skills</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="rapidly">rapidly</span> <span word="cultivated">cultivated</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="quickly">quickly</span> <span word="developed">developed</span>.</p>
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