2015考研英语写作“凑字数”也要有章法
<p> 2015考研已经进入最后阶段，在剩下不到60天的时间里，我们的写作复习开始显得尤为重要。而我们在集训营和各地分校的教学实践中发现，学生在初期写作练习时常常为字数不够而犯愁。而还有一部分同学用了一些不恰当的方式来填充字数，结果效果却显得适得其反。彭飞老师认为，写作文确实有时候是有所谓凑字数的必要，但是也需要有章法，有技巧。</p><p> 下面我们先看一篇字数不够的例文，这是一篇申请信，讲述的是一个学生要申请到别的学校深造。</p><p> <span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Siror">Siror</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span>,</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="college">college</span>.<span word="My">My</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="English">English</span>,<span word="and">and</span> <span word="Ig">Ig</span> <span word="raduated">raduated</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="Beijing">Beijing</span> <span word="University">University</span>.</p><p> <span word="First">First</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span>,<span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="performance">performance</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="school">school</span>.<span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>,<span word="Iam">Iam</span> <span word="open">open</span>-<span word="minded">minded</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="intelligent">intelligent</span>.<span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>,<span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="command">command</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="English">English</span>.</p><p> <span word="Enclosed">Enclosed</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="resume">resume</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="additional">additional</span> <span word="information">information</span>.<span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span>.</p><p> <span word="Yours">Yours</span> <span word="Sincerely">Sincerely</span>,</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Ming">Ming</span></p> 本文总体来说无论语言表达能力还是词汇和语法的驾驭都可谓是上乘佳作，但是大家可以看得很清楚的是，文章的字数明显不够。除开标点、称呼和落款，字数总计才仅仅63个单词，距离我们最起码规定的80词还缺17个单词。那么我们可以拿三个自然段分别来开刀。</p>
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