考研倒数14天写作得分多
<p> 第十七天：大小写作 得分多多---图画作文功能段落</p><p> 今天我继续讲授大作文的复习方法---背诵和模仿功能段落。早在2000年暑假讲授考研写作时就提出了考研英语<span word="ESSAY">ESSAY</span>写作十大学术功能段落的概念，从此成为各类考研写作课的必讲内容。所谓功能段落，简而言之，就是用于完成一个要点的表述的段落。以图画作文而言，通常包括三个要点，那么它就包含三个功能段落：图画描述段、意义阐释段与建议措施段。关于意义阐释段，前面已经有详细论述，所以这里只给出图画描述段与建议措施段，可以背诵和模仿，与前面学习的套话相互补充。</p><p> 图画描述段：</p><p> <span word="As">As</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="shown">shown</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="picture">picture</span>, <span word="trees">trees</span> <span word="play">play</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="vital">vital</span> <span word="role">role</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="water">water</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="soil">soil</span> <span word="conservation">conservation</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="left">left</span> <span word="hand">hand</span> <span word="picture">picture</span>, <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="fleeing">fleeing</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="voracious">voracious</span> <span word="sand">sand</span> <span word="dunes">dunes</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="cut">cut</span> <span word="down">down</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="trees">trees</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="caption">caption</span> <span word="reads">reads</span>, <span word="As">As</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sand">sand</span> <span word="advances">advances</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="retreat">retreat</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="right">right</span> <span word="hand">hand</span> <span word="picture">picture</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="returned">returned</span> <span word="carrying">carrying</span> <span word="tools">tools</span>, <span word="water">water</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="saplings">saplings</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="reforestation">reforestation</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="land">land</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="caption">caption</span> <span word="reds">reds</span>: <span word="As">As</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="advance">advance</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sand">sand</span> <span word="retreats">retreats</span>.</p><p> 建议措施段：</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="imperative">imperative</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="steps">steps</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="reverse">reverse</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="disturbing">disturbing</span> <span word="trend">trend</span> <span word="illustrated">illustrated</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="charts">charts</span>. <span word="One">One</span> <span word="measure">measure</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="forbid">forbid</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="building">building</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="cities">cities</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="areas">areas</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="wildlife">wildlife</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="threatened">threatened</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="extinction">extinction</span>. <span word="But">But</span>, <span word="more">more</span> <span word="importantly">importantly</span>, <span word="man">man</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="stop">stop</span> <span word="polluting">polluting</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="environment">environment</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="himself">himself</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="extinct">extinct</span>.</p>
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