考研英语作文要四化
<p> 准确化主要表现为两个方面:一是词汇准确化。词汇准确化主要把握拼写、介词、同义词运用。二是句子准确化。句子准确化主要是避免写病句。以下是作文中三个常见的语言陷阱:</p><p> 陷阱1:语言习惯。对同一现象的描述,表示同一种意义时中英文有差异。例如,汉语说一阵大雨,英语写成<span word="a">a</span> <span word="heavy">heavy</span> <span word="rain">rain</span>,不能写成<span word="a">a</span> <span word="big">big</span> <span word="rain">rain</span> 。</p><p> 陷阱2:错误类推。学生由所学语言的规则开始错误类推。例如,由<span word="I">I</span> <span word="went">went</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="store">store</span> <span word="yesterday">yesterday</span> <span word="morning">morning</span>.推出<span word="I">I</span> <span word="went">went</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="concert">concert</span> <span word="yesterday">yesterday</span> <span word="night">night</span>.这种推导得出的句子是一个错句。昨天晚上英语只能说<span word="last">last</span> <span word="night">night</span>。</p><p> 陷阱3:直译思维。学生照汉语思维直译,导致了表达错误和不地道、不准确的英语表达。比如,学生把你的来信收到了写成<span word="Your">Your</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="received">received</span>.。这是从汉语中直译出来的,因为英语中物做主语时,应该用被动语态,应写成<span word="Your">Your</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="received">received</span>.</p><p> 词句多样化</p><p> 词的多样化是指用词要多样。比如说图画作文,我们会用到<span word="show">show</span>, 我们也可以说<span word="reveals">reveals</span>,<span word="indicates">indicates</span>,<span word="illustrates">illustrates</span>等等。再比如认为,我们可以说<span word="think">think</span>, 也可以说<span word="hold">hold</span>, <span word="maintain">maintain</span>, <span word="insist">insist</span> <span word="that">that</span>。表达越来越不要老说<span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span>,还可以用<span word="in">in</span> <span word="growing">growing</span> <span word="numbers">numbers</span>,<span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rise">rise</span>等。</p><p> 而句子的多样化主要为以下五个方面:句子开头多样化,主语多样化,定语的多样化,长短句变化。比如,大部分的考生都喜欢用主谓宾砖头式的句子去砸阅卷老师,不知道变化一下,用不定式、形容词、介词短语、分词、同谓语、从句开头。使用句子还要讲究平行原则,如何把短句子连接成为长句子,如何把短句扩展成长句子。</p>
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