2015考研英语作文：英语一作文范文解析
<p> 大作文依然是图画作文，与去年的热点话题老有所依有关，难度适中，因为这个话题对于很多同学来说应该不陌生。图画表现了三十年前一个年轻妈妈拉着小女孩儿，现在是长大后的女儿搀扶着她妈妈一起走。图画下方写着相携，体现出的含义就是子女与父母相携走过。同学写作此文时，在第一段中描述出图画内容，在第二段中阐释意义，结合实际阐述文中相携的意义，同学可以结合主题展开叙述和讨论。第三段给出相应地评论和建议。文都老师在此给大家提供以下范文，供大家参考。</p><p> 大作文题干要求与以往一样：</p><p> <span word="Write">Write</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="of">of</span> 160-200 <span word="words">words</span> <span word="based">based</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="drawing">drawing</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="essay">essay</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="should">should</span></p><p> 1) <span word="describe">describe</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="drawing">drawing</span> <span word="briefly">briefly</span>,</p><p> 2) <span word="Interpret">Interpret</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="intended">intended</span> <span word="meaning">meaning</span> <span word="and">and</span></p><p> 3) <span word="give">give</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="comments">comments</span>,</p><p> <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="neatly">neatly</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ANSWER">ANSWER</span> <span word="SHEET">SHEET</span>.</p><p> 范文：</p><p> <span word="As">As</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="picture">picture</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="mother">mother</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="holding">holding</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="girls">girls</span> <span word="hand">hand</span> <span word="thirty">thirty</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="ago">ago</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="now">now</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="girl">girl</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="holding">holding</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="mothers">mothers</span> <span word="arm">arm</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="girl">girl</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mother">mother</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="walk">walk</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="step">step</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="other">other</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="authors">authors</span> <span word="real">real</span> <span word="purpose">purpose</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="simple">simple</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="picture">picture</span> <span word="itself">itself</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="lead">lead</span> <span word="observers">observers</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="hides">hides</span> <span word="behind">behind</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="iceberg">iceberg</span>.</p><p> <span word="When">When</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="children">children</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="needed">needed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="rely">rely</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="parents">parents</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="lives">lives</span>, <span word="give">give</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="love">love</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="have">have</span>. <span word="When">When</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="grow">grow</span> <span word="up">up</span>, <span word="our">our</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="older">older</span>. <span word="Then">Then</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="them">them</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="quite">quite</span> <span word="busy">busy</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="working">working</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="rarely">rarely</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="visit">visit</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="parents">parents</span>, <span word="talk">talk</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="accompany">accompany</span> <span word="them">them</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="leads">leads</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="empty">empty</span> <span word="nesters">nesters</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="live">live</span> <span word="lonely">lonely</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="chat">chat</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="share">share</span> <span word="happiness">happiness</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="sorrow">sorrow</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="reduce">reduce</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="loneliness">loneliness</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="parents">parents</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="visit">visit</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="frequently">frequently</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="them">them</span>. <span word="Even">Even</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="quite">quite</span> <span word="busy">busy</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="certain">certain</span> <span word="period">period</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="call">call</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="basis">basis</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="feelings">feelings</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="physical">physical</span> <span word="conditions">conditions</span>.</p>
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