考研英语的作文范文名师批改（十一）
<p> 考研英语作文热门话题范文：老外过春节</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="black">black</span> <span word="man">man</span>, <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="happy">happy</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="delighted">delighted</span> <span word="face">face</span>, <span word="is">is</span> <span word="spending">spending</span> <span word="spring">spring</span> <span word="festival">festival</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="family">family</span>. <span word="Conspicuously">Conspicuously</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="encouraging">encouraging</span> <span word="scene">scene</span> <span word="relate">relate</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="culture">culture</span> <span word="integration">integration</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="China">China</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="west">west</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="excellent">excellent</span> <span word="offspring">offspring</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="century">century</span>.<span word="Several">Several</span> <span word="factor">factor</span> <span word="weight">weight</span> <span word="heavily">heavily</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="emerging">emerging</span> <span word="trend">trend</span> <span word="illustrate">illustrate</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="picture">picture</span>, <span word="yet">yet</span>, <span word="two">two</span> <span word="kernels">kernels</span> <span word="suspended">suspended</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="top">top</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="list">list</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="overlooked">overlooked</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="economy">economy</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="witnessed">witnessed</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="unprecedented">unprecedented</span> <span word="lever">lever</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="growth">growth</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="past">past</span> 30 <span word="years">years</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="powerful">powerful</span> <span word="impetus">impetus</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="publicity">publicity</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="civilization">civilization</span>. <span word="Whats">Whats</span> <span word="more">more</span>, <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="culture">culture</span>, <span word="though">though</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="perpetual">perpetual</span> <span word="wars">wars</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="turbulence">turbulence</span>, <span word="preserve">preserve</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="vitality">vitality</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="glamour">glamour</span>, <span word="assets">assets</span> <span word="appreciated">appreciated</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="foreigners">foreigners</span>. <span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="encouraging">encouraging</span> <span word="parallels">parallels</span> <span word="today">today</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="westerners">westerners</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="wave">wave</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="making">making</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="trip">trip</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="China">China</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="panorama">panorama</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="heritage">heritage</span>.<span word="From">From</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="perspective">perspective</span>, <span word="various">various</span> <span word="measures">measures</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="foster">foster</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="integration">integration</span>. <span word="Firstly">Firstly</span>, <span word="suitable">suitable</span> <span word="atmosphere">atmosphere</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="created">created</span>, <span word="where">where</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="culture">culture</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="counterparts">counterparts</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="co">co</span>-<span word="exist">exist</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="harmonious">harmonious</span>.,<span word="by">by</span> <span word="us">us</span>. <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="authorities">authorities</span> <span word="ought">ought</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="lunch">lunch</span> <span word="various">various</span> <span word="publicity">publicity</span> <span word="campaigns">campaigns</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="culture">culture</span> <span word="known">known</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="world">world</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="cultural">cultural</span> <span word="thrive">thrive</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="loomed">loomed</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="economic">economic</span> <span word="prosperity">prosperity</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="away">away</span>.</p><p> 编辑点评</p><p> 整体来说，文章写得不错;但还存在个别简单的语法错误。作者在写作完之后若可以花费几分钟时间来回读文章，便会减少不必要的错误。考研作文的整体思路你已经基本掌握，后面要做的就是多积累高分佳句，为自己的文章增彩;再者，写完之后一定要认真检查，减少失分点。</p>
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