名师批改考研英语作文范文（六）
<p> 考研英语作文热门话题范文：志愿者</p><p> <span word="From">From</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="picture">picture</span> <span word="above">above</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="trees">trees</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="picture">picture</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="growing">growing</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="strongly">strongly</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="trees">trees</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="small">small</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="careful">careful</span> <span word="notice">notice</span>, <span word="youll">youll</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="tree">tree</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="bend">bend</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="big">big</span> <span word="tree">tree</span> <span word="hostile">hostile</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="development">development</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="drawer">drawer</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="image">image</span> <span word="aims">aims</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="revealing">revealing</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="common">common</span> <span word="phenomenon">phenomenon</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="country">country</span>, <span word="children">children</span> <span word="today">today</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="generally">generally</span> <span word="spoiled">spoiled</span>. <span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problem">problem</span>. <span word="On">On</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="reform">reform</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="population">population</span> <span word="policy">policy</span>, <span word="most">most</span> <span word="families">families</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="allowedonly">allowedonly</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="child">child</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="usually">usually</span> <span word="regarded">regarded</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="apple">apple</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="eye">eye</span>. <span word="Therefore">Therefore</span>, <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="try">try</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="child">child</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="everything">everything</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="want">want</span>. <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>, <span word="lacking">lacking</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="awareness">awareness</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="bearing">bearing</span> <span word="hardships">hardships</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="ignored">ignored</span>.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="imperative">imperative</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="effective">effective</span> <span word="measures">measures</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="our">our</span> <span word="government">government</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="modify">modify</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="policy">policy</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="allows">allows</span> <span word="families">families</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="raise">raise</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="students">students</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="measure">measure</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="cultivate">cultivate</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sense">sense</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="dependent">dependent</span>. <span word="Only">Only</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="way">way</span>, <span word="can">can</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="meliorate">meliorate</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="near">near</span> <span word="future">future</span>.</p><p> 点评</p><p> 文章准确把握了试题的考察点，立意正确，内容较充实，有衔接，层次清楚，需注意以下问题：</p><p> 1.文章有些许语法错误，需检查自己是由于粗心大意还是因为在名词、形容词、副词等方面掌握有问题，加强自己的语法基础;</p>
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