2015考研英语作文预测模板：豪华婚礼
<p> 写作原文</p><p> <span word="As">As</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="vividly">vividly</span> <span word="betrayed">betrayed</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="drawing">drawing</span> <span word="above">above</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="newly">newly</span>-<span word="married">married</span> <span word="couple">couple</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="hugging">hugging</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="happily">happily</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="holding">holding</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="huge">huge</span> <span word="amount">amount</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="debt">debt</span> <span word="hardly">hardly</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="sentence">sentence</span><span word="Establish">Establish</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="happiness">happiness</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="basis">basis</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="hardship">hardship</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="lighlightsthat">lighlightsthat</span> <span word="nowadays">nowadays</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="penple">penple</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="seeking">seeking</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="happiness">happiness</span> <span word="despite">despite</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="feeling">feeling</span>. <span word="So">So</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="causes">causes</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="phenomenon">phenomenon</span>?<span word="From">From</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="view">view</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="mainly">mainly</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span>. <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="promotion">promotion</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Family">Family</span> <span word="planning">planning</span>, <span word="many">many</span> <span word="families">families</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="child">child</span> <span word="only">only</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="child">child</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="spoilt">spoilt</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="quality">quality</span> <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="many">many</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="psychology">psychology</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="comparison">comparison</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="wish">wish</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="hold">hold</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="luxurious">luxurious</span> <span word="wedding">wedding</span> <span word="ceremony">ceremony</span>.<span word="In">In</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="solve">solve</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="problem">problem</span>, <span word="children">children</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="develop">develop</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="virtue">virtue</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="thrifty">thrifty</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="marriage">marriage</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lifetime">lifetime</span> <span word="matter">matter</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="changed">changed</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="wedding">wedding</span> <span word="ceremony">ceremony</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="luxurious">luxurious</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="not">not</span>. <span word="So">So</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="refuse">refuse</span> <span word="luxurious">luxurious</span> <span word="wedding">wedding</span> <span word="ceremony">ceremony</span>. <span word="Futhermore">Futhermore</span>, <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="spoil">spoil</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="satisfy">satisfy</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="demands">demands</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="under">under</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="joint">joint</span> <span word="effort">effort</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="children">children</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ethos">ethos</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="keeping">keeping</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="joneses">joneses</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="decreased">decreased</span> <span word="significantly">significantly</span></p><p> 总体点评</p><p> 整体来说，文章构思不错;考研作文的整体思路你已经基本掌握，但还存在一些语法错误及汉语式英语的表达。后面要做的就是巩固语法知识，多积累高分佳句并不断模仿，弱化汉语思维对英语写作的影响，并为自己的文章增彩;再者，写完之后一定要认真检查，减少失分点。加油吧，祝你考研成功!</p>
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