六级备考七大原则让你玩转六级写作
<p> 一、 长短句原则。 工作还得一张一驰呢，老让读者读长句，累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子，相反，却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题： <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="creature">creature</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="eat">eat</span>; <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="man">man</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="read">read</span>. <span word="Although">Although</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="action">action</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="meet">meet</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="primary">primary</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="body">body</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="satisfy">satisfy</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="intellectual">intellectual</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="mind">mind</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="quite">quite</span> <span word="similar">similar</span>. 如此可见，长短句结合，抑扬顿挫，岂不爽哉?牢记!强烈建议：在文章第一段用一长一短，且先长后短;在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。 二、 主题句原则。 国有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成群龙无首之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学，故意把主体隐藏在文章之内，结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句，放在文章的开头或者结尾，让读者一目了然，必会平安无事!特别提示：隐藏主体句可是要冒险的! <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="hard">hard</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="lessons">lessons</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="fully">fully</span> <span word="prepared">prepared</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="exam">exam</span>. <span word="Without">Without</span> <span word="sufficient">sufficient</span> <span word="preparation">preparation</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="hardly">hardly</span> <span word="expect">expect</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="answer">answer</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="questions">questions</span> <span word="correctly">correctly</span> 三、 一二三原则。 领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点... 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的标签来判定你的文章是否结构清楚，条理自然。破解方法很简单，只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。 1)<span word="first">first</span>, <span word="second">second</span>, <span word="third">third</span>, <span word="last">last</span> 2)<span word="firstly">firstly</span>, <span word="secondly">secondly</span>, <span word="thirdly">thirdly</span>, <span word="finally">finally</span> 3)<span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="second">second</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="third">third</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="last">last</span> 4)<span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="place">place</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="second">second</span> <span word="place">place</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="third">third</span> <span word="place">place</span>, <span word="lastly">lastly</span> 5)<span word="to">to</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="then">then</span>, <span word="furthermore">furthermore</span>, <span word="finally">finally</span> 6)<span word="to">to</span> <span word="start">start</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="next">next</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="finally">finally</span> 7)<span word="first">first</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="foremost">foremost</span>, <span word="besides">besides</span>, <span word="last">last</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="least">least</span> 8)<span word="most">most</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span>, <span word="moreover">moreover</span>, <span word="finally">finally</span> 9)<span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>, <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="hand">hand</span> 10)<span word="for">for</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="thing">thing</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="thing">thing</span>建议：不仅仅在写作中注意，平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚! 四、 短语优先原则。 写作时，尤其是在考试时，如果使用短语，有两个好处：其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点，如果老师们看到你的文章太简单，看不到一个自己不认识的短语，必然会看你低一等。相反，如果发现亮点-精彩的短语，那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路，只有凑字数，怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如： <span word="I">I</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="bear">bear</span> <span word="it">it</span>. 可以用短语表达：<span word="I">I</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="it">it</span>. 可以用短语表达：<span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="it">it</span>. 这样字数明显增加，表达也更准确。 五、 多实少虚原则。 原因很简单，写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西，不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词，少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候，不应该之说<span word="nice">nice</span>这样空洞的词，应该使用一些诸如<span word="generous">generous</span>, <span word="humorous">humorous</span>, <span word="interesting">interesting</span>, <span word="smart">smart</span>, <span word="gentle">gentle</span>, <span word="warm">warm</span>-<span word="hearted">hearted</span>, <span word="hospital">hospital</span> 之类的形象词。再比如： 走出房间，<span word="general">general</span>的词是：<span word="walk">walk</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="room">room</span> 但是小偷走出房间应该说：<span word="slip">slip</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="room">room</span> 小姐走出房间应该说：<span word="sail">sail</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="room">room</span> 小孩走出房间应该说：<span word="dance">dance</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="room">room</span> 老人走出房间应该说：<span word="stagger">stagger</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="room">room</span> 所以多用实词，少用虚词，文章将会大放异彩! 六、 多变句式原则。 1)加法都希望写下很长的句子，像个老外似的，可就是怕写错，怎么办，最保险的写长句的方法就是这些，可以在任何句子之间加<span word="and">and</span>, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说： <span word="I">I</span> <span word="enjor">enjor</span> <span word="music">music</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="fond">fond</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="playing">playing</span> <span word="guitar">guitar</span>. 如果是二者并列的，我们可以用一个超级句式： <span word="Not">Not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fur">fur</span> <span word="coat">coat</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="soft">soft</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="warm">warm</span>. 其它的短语可以用： <span word="besides">besides</span>, <span word="furthermore">furthermore</span>, <span word="likewise">likewise</span>, <span word="moreover">moreover</span> 2)转折批评某人缺点的时候，我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点，然后转入正题，再说缺点，这种方式虽然阴险了点，可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢，我们说话的时候，只要在要点之前先来点废话，注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。 <span word="The">The</span> <span word="car">car</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="quite">quite</span> <span word="old">old</span>, <span word="yet">yet</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="excellent">excellent</span> <span word="condition">condition</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="coat">coat</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="thin">thin</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="warm">warm</span>. 更多的短语： <span word="despite">despite</span> <span word="that">that</span>, <span word="still">still</span>, <span word="however">however</span>, <span word="nevertheless">nevertheless</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="spite">spite</span> <span word="of">of</span>, <span word="despite">despite</span>, <span word="notwithstanding">notwithstanding</span> 3)因果昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩，然后我主动搭讪，然后我们去咖啡厅，然后我们认识了，然后我们成为了朋友..。可见，讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序，先什么，后什么，所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系! <span word="The">The</span> <span word="snow">snow</span> <span word="began">began</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="fall">fall</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="went">went</span> <span word="home">home</span>. 更多短语： <span word="then">then</span>, <span word="therefore">therefore</span>, <span word="consequently">consequently</span>, <span word="accordingly">accordingly</span>, <span word="hence">hence</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="reason">reason</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="that">that</span> 4)失衡句有些人脑袋大，身体小，或者有些人脑袋小，身体大，虽然我们不希望长成这个样子，可如果真的是这样了，也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子，就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句，表语从句，宾语从句的变形。举例：<span word="This">This</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="do">do</span>. <span word="Whether">Whether</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="sure">sure</span>. 同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分： <span word="When">When</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="go">go</span>, <span word="Why">Why</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="goes">goes</span> <span word="away">away</span>..。 5)附加如果有了老婆，总会遇到这样的情况，当你再讲某个人的时候，她会插一句说，我昨天见过他;或者说，就是某某某，如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面，那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。 <span word="The">The</span> <span word="man">man</span> <span word="whom">whom</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="met">met</span> <span word="yesterday">yesterday</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="friend">friend</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="mine">mine</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="dont">dont</span> <span word="enjoy">enjoy</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="book">book</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="reading">reading</span>. <span word="Mr">Mr</span> <span word="liu">liu</span>, <span word="our">our</span> <span word="oral">oral</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="teacher">teacher</span>, <span word="is">is</span> <span word="easy">easy</span>-<span word="going">going</span>. 其实很简单，同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句-借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中，但是<span word="whom">whom</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="that">that</span> 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。 6)排比文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此，如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话，那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句，一个个得对偶句，一个个的不定式，一个个地词，一个个的短语，如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势! <span word="Whether">Whether</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="tastes">tastes</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="traditional">traditional</span>, <span word="sophisticated">sophisticated</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="simple">simple</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="plenty">plenty</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="London">London</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="you">you</span>. <span word="Nowadays">Nowadays</span>, <span word="energy">energy</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="obtained">obtained</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="various">various</span> <span word="sources">sources</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="oil">oil</span>, <span word="coal">coal</span>, <span word="natural">natural</span> <span word="gas">gas</span>, <span word="solar">solar</span> <span word="heat">heat</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="wind">wind</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="ocean">ocean</span> <span word="tides">tides</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="got">got</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="hard">hard</span>, <span word="to">to</span> <span word="enlarge">enlarge</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="scope">scope</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span>, <span word="to">to</span> <span word="realize">realize</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="potentials">potentials</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="pay">pay</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="life">life</span>. 要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可! 七、 挑战极限原则 既然十挑战极限，必然是比较难的，但是并非不可攀!原理：在学生的文章中，很少发现诸如独立主格的句子，其实也很简单，只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会，它就是分词的一种特殊形式，分词要求主语一致，而独立主格则不然。比如： <span word="The">The</span> <span word="weather">weather</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="fine">fine</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="went">went</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="climb">climb</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Western">Western</span> <span word="Hills">Hills</span>. <span word="Africa">Africa</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="second">second</span> <span word="largest">largest</span> <span word="continent">continent</span>, <span word="its">its</span> <span word="size">size</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="times">times</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="China">China</span>. 如果您可一些出这样的句子，不得高分才怪!</p>
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