英语六级写作真题点评
<p> 【题目】 <span word="Directions">Directions</span>: <span word="For">For</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="part">part</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> 30 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="short">short</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="entitled">entitled</span> <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Importance">Importance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="Name">Name</span>. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 150 <span word="words">words</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outline">outline</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="below">below</span>. 1. 有人说名字或名称很重要 也有人觉得名字或名称无关紧要 我认为 <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Importance">Importance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="Name">Name</span> 【点评】 看到题目，根本没有办法从点评的角度去分析。因为这次题目的特点 一、 简单（标准的议论文，而且不需要自行整理结构的那种） 二、 传统（没有任何标新立意，甚至有一种想法认为，这个题目出的事不是没有办法的办法，当然是玩笑） 三、 标准（符合六级作文的重点考察文体） 对于这次的作文，要完成一篇高质量的文章其实根本就不难。根据作文写作要求文章的结构可以清晰地阐述 第一段：关于名字这个现象的引入+提出欲论证的语言； 第二段：结合题目要求，进行两项观点的论证（注意稍微有些原因阐述，不宜过多，否则字数上不好掌握） 第三段：承接上文，提出自己的观点并论证（同样注意理由的阐述要控制，否则同样会被认为写文章没有控制力） 下面，就给出我自己写的一篇范文。大家千万注意，没有所谓真正的范文。任何人写出来的文章其实都可以得满分。我的这篇文章其实某种意义上来说，就是为了印证课堂上反复强调的关于写作能力的展示。 <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="importance">importance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="name">name</span> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="name">name</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="representation">representation</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="persons">persons</span> <span word="identification">identification</span> <span word="and">and</span>, <span word="to">to</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="extent">extent</span>, <span word="can">can</span> <span word="demonstrate">demonstrate</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="character">character</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="current">current</span> <span word="days">days</span>, <span word="however">however</span>, <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="name">name</span> <span word="plays">plays</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="significant">significant</span> <span word="role">role</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="hot">hot</span> <span word="discussion">discussion</span>. <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="argue">argue</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="exerts">exerts</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="subtle">subtle</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="indispensable">indispensable</span> <span word="influence">influence</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="lives">lives</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="start">start</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="no">no</span> <span word="matter">matter</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="do">do</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="fail">fail</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="live">live</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="identification">identification</span>. <span word="Besides">Besides</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="name">name</span> <span word="perhaps">perhaps</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="assist">assist</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="recognized">recognized</span> <span word="remembered">remembered</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="relatively">relatively</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="ease">ease</span>. <span word="While">While</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rest">rest</span> <span word="hold">hold</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="side">side</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="picture">picture</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="name">name</span> <span word="fundamentally">fundamentally</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="effect">effect</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="lives">lives</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="state">state</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="able">able</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="friends">friends</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="cooperate">cooperate</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="name">name</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="simply">simply</span> <span word="name">name</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="concerned">concerned</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="crucial">crucial</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="name">name</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="man">man</span> <span word="possesses">possesses</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="everyone">everyone</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="desert">desert</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="name">name</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="stands">stands</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="symbol">symbol</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span>. <span word="Furthermore">Furthermore</span>, <span word="common">common</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="name">name</span> <span word="perhaps">perhaps</span> <span word="is">is</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="assists">assists</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="live">live</span>, <span word="work">work</span>, <span word="communicate">communicate</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="cooperate">cooperate</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="others">others</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="extremely">extremely</span> <span word="hard">hard</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="imagine">imagine</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="live">live</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="knowing">knowing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="names">names</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="were">were</span>, <span word="are">are</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="with">with</span>. <span word="Only">Only</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="remember">remember</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="names">names</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="establish">establish</span> <span word="reasonable">reasonable</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="pleasant">pleasant</span> <span word="relations">relations</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="them">them</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="surely">surely</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="harm">harm</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="present">present</span> <span word="world">world</span>. 写有不对之处，还请同学们多多指教！</p>
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