英语六级考前热点高分范文七
<p> <span word="Directions">Directions</span>: <span word="For">For</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="part">part</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> 30 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="composition">composition</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="topic">topic</span> <span word="Is">Is</span> <span word="Thrift">Thrift</span> <span word="Still">Still</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="Good">Good</span> <span word="Virtue">Virtue</span>? <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 150 <span word="words">words</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="base">base</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="composition">composition</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outline">outline</span> <span word="below">below</span>: 1)随着人们生活水平的提高，一些人认为节俭和朴素的生活方式已经过时了 2)但是很多人反对这种说法 3)你的看法是，为什么? <span word="Is">Is</span> <span word="Thrift">Thrift</span> <span word="Still">Still</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="Good">Good</span> <span word="Virtue">Virtue</span>? _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 行文思路 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一种观点，提纲第2点提出另外一种相反的观点，提纲第3点要求谈谈我的观点，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：提出第1种观点：节俭和朴素的生活方式已经过时了，并说明理由;提出第2种观点：节俭和朴素仍然是一种美德，并说明理由;表明我对节俭的看法，并说明理由。 高分范文 <span word="Is">Is</span> <span word="Thrift">Thrift</span> <span word="Still">Still</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="Good">Good</span> <span word="Virtue">Virtue</span>? <span word="With">With</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="improvement">improvement</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="standards">standards</span>, <span word="many">many</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="longer">longer</span> <span word="interested">interested</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="simple">simple</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="style">style</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="ashamed">ashamed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="thrifty">thrifty</span>. <span word="What">What</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="pursue">pursue</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="latest">latest</span> <span word="fashion">fashion</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="eyes">eyes</span>, <span word="thrift">thrift</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="already">already</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="style">style</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="still">still</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="insist">insist</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="thrift">thrift</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="virtue">virtue</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="say">say</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="unprecedented">unprecedented</span> <span word="power">power</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="production">production</span> <span word="doesnt">doesnt</span> <span word="mean">mean</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="entitled">entitled</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="extravagance">extravagance</span>, <span word="because">because</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="natural">natural</span> <span word="resources">resources</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="limited">limited</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="decline">decline</span>. <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="hold">hold</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="waste">waste</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="lead">lead</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="degradation">degradation</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="atmosphere">atmosphere</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="environmental">environmental</span> <span word="pollution">pollution</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="me">me</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="prefer">prefer</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="latter">latter</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="Waste">Waste</span> <span word="not">not</span>, <span word="want">want</span> <span word="not">not</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="truth">truth</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="saying">saying</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="comfort">comfort</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="enhance">enhance</span> <span word="efficiency">efficiency</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="fact">fact</span>, <span word="economic">economic</span> <span word="growth">growth</span> <span word="depends">depends</span> <span word="enormously">enormously</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="saving">saving</span>. <span word="Besides">Besides</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="millions">millions</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="under">under</span> <span word="poverty">poverty</span> <span word="line">line</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="afford">afford</span> <span word="reckless">reckless</span> <span word="waste">waste</span>. <span word="Therefore">Therefore</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="doubt">doubt</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="thrift">thrift</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="virtue">virtue</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="up">up</span>. 【亮点点评】 不再。 表示递进。 引出另外一种观点。 在下降。 过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。 用于引出自己的观点或选择。 引用谚语俭以防匮。 <span word="not">not</span>... <span word="but">but</span>连接并列结构，意为不是而是。 现在分词短语作后置定语。 毫无疑问。 佳句临摹 1.佳句：<span word="Our">Our</span> <span word="natural">natural</span> <span word="resources">resources</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="limited">limited</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="decline">decline</span>. 临摹：车祸使人们的财产遭受极大的损失，甚至还夺走了无数人的生命。 ___________________________________________________________________________. 2.佳句：<span word="The">The</span> <span word="truth">truth</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="saying">saying</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="comfort">comfort</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="enhance">enhance</span> <span word="efficiency">efficiency</span>. 临摹：我们永远都不应该低估自己的能力，而应该相信一句谚语：有志者，事竟成。 ___________________________________________________________________________. 【<span word="KEY">KEY</span>】 1. <span word="Traffic">Traffic</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="caused">caused</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="damages">damages</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="peoples">peoples</span> <span word="properties">properties</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="taken">taken</span> <span word="away">away</span> <span word="thousands">thousands</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="peoples">peoples</span> <span word="lives">lives</span>. 2. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="underestimate">underestimate</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="abilities">abilities</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="proverb">proverb</span>: <span word="Where">Where</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="will">will</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="way">way</span>. </p>
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