英语六级热点范文5
<p> <span word="Directions">Directions</span>: <span word="For">For</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="part">part</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> 30 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="composition">composition</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="topic">topic</span> <span word="How">How</span> <span word="Should">Should</span> <span word="College">College</span> <span word="Students">Students</span> <span word="Relieve">Relieve</span> <span word="Pressure">Pressure</span>? <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 150 <span word="words">words</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="base">base</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="composition">composition</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outline">outline</span> （<span word="given">given</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span>） <span word="below">below</span>: 1）当今的大学生要面临很多来自不同方面的压力 2）大学生缓解压力的方式有 3）你一般都是如何排解压力的? <span word="How">How</span> <span word="Should">Should</span> <span word="College">College</span> <span word="Students">Students</span> <span word="Relieve">Relieve</span> <span word="Pressure">Pressure</span>? _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 行文思路 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一个问题，提纲第2点要求说明如何解决该问题，提纲第3点要求阐述我的做法，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出当今的大学生主要面临哪些压力;列举大学生缓解压力的方式;谈谈我是采取哪种方式排解压力的。 高分范文 <span word="How">How</span> <span word="Should">Should</span> <span word="College">College</span> <span word="Students">Students</span> <span word="Relieve">Relieve</span> <span word="Pressure">Pressure</span>? <span word="Todays">Todays</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="face">face</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="pressures">pressures</span>, <span word="mainly">mainly</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="expectation">expectation</span>, <span word="study">study</span>, <span word="economy">economy</span>, <span word="employment">employment</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="kinds">kinds</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="competition">competition</span>. <span word="Although">Although</span> <span word="pressure">pressure</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="motivation">motivation</span>, <span word="overdue">overdue</span> <span word="pressure">pressure</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="serious">serious</span> <span word="negative">negative</span> <span word="effect">effect</span>. <span word="Pressure">Pressure</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="destroy">destroy</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="confidence">confidence</span>. <span word="More">More</span> <span word="seriously">seriously</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="lose">lose</span> <span word="control">control</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="emotions">emotions</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="behaviors">behaviors</span>. <span word="Considering">Considering</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="damage">damage</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="overdue">overdue</span> <span word="pressure">pressure</span>, <span word="college">college</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="relieve">relieve</span> <span word="pressure">pressure</span>. <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="right">right</span> <span word="evaluation">evaluation</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="ourselves">ourselves</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="advantages">advantages</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="avoid">avoid</span> <span word="disadvantages">disadvantages</span>. <span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="set">set</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="clear">clear</span> <span word="aim">aim</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="struggle">struggle</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="aim">aim</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="motivation">motivation</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="active">active</span>. <span word="Third">Third</span>, <span word="attending">attending</span> <span word="collective">collective</span> <span word="activities">activities</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="effective">effective</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="relieve">relieve</span> <span word="pressure">pressure</span>. <span word="Finally">Finally</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="pressure">pressure</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="nearly">nearly</span> <span word="beyond">beyond</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="control">control</span>, <span word="youd">youd</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="turn">turn</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="professional">professional</span> <span word="psychological">psychological</span> <span word="guidance">guidance</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="me">me</span>, <span word="my">my</span> <span word="pressure">pressure</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="mainly">mainly</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="future">future</span> <span word="employment">employment</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="reduce">reduce</span> <span word="it">it</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="asked">asked</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="analyse">analyse</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="advantages">advantages</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="disadvantages">disadvantages</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="produce">produce</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="practical">practical</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="objection">objection</span>. <span word="So">So</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="employment">employment</span> <span word="pressure">pressure</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="relieved">relieved</span> <span word="greatly">greatly</span>. <span word="Now">Now</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="confident">confident</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="future">future</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="ideal">ideal</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="graduation">graduation</span>. 亮点点评 <span word="although">although</span>引导让步状语从句。 过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。 考虑到，鉴于，介词。 表示目的。 扬长避短。 设立一个明确的奋斗目标。 动名词短语作主语，用不同于前两点的句式提出缓解压力的第三种方式。 超出范围或能力。 强调动词<span word="believe">believe</span>. 佳句临摹 佳句：<span word="Although">Although</span> <span word="pressure">pressure</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="motivation">motivation</span>, <span word="overdue">overdue</span> <span word="pressure">pressure</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="serious">serious</span> <span word="negative">negative</span> <span word="effect">effect</span>. 临摹：尽管兼职工作能够带来很多好处，但我们不应该在它上面花费太多的时间。 ___________________________________________________________________________. 2.佳句：<span word="Attending">Attending</span> <span word="collective">collective</span> <span word="activities">activities</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="effective">effective</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="relieve">relieve</span> 临摹：学会如何与人沟通是步入社会的第一步也是最重要的一步。 ___________________________________________________________________________. 3.佳句：<span word="In">In</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="reduce">reduce</span> <span word="it">it</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="asked">asked</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="analyse">analyse</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="advantages">advantages</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="disadvantages">disadvantages</span> 临摹： 为了在激烈的竞争中获得优势，大学生们必须全面发展自己的能力。 ___________________________________________________________________________. <span word="KEY">KEY</span>: <span word="Although">Although</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="part">part</span>-<span word="time">time</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="us">us</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="spend">spend</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="it">it</span>. 2. <span word="Learning">Learning</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="deal">deal</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="step">step</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="enter">enter</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="society">society</span>. 3. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="priority">priority</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fierce">fierce</span> <span word="competition">competition</span>, <span word="college">college</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="develop">develop</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="abilities">abilities</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="all">all</span>-<span word="around">around</span> <span word="way">way</span>.</p>
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