英语六级考前热点高分范文六
<p> <span word="Directions">Directions</span>: <span word="For">For</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="part">part</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> 30 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="composition">composition</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="topic">topic</span> <span word="Credit">Credit</span> <span word="Cards">Cards</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="Campus">Campus</span>. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 150 <span word="words">words</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="base">base</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="composition">composition</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outline">outline</span> <span word="below">below</span>: 1)近年来越来越多的大学生开始使用信用卡 2)分析产生该现象的原因 3)针对大学生使用信用卡提出你的建议 <span word="Credit">Credit</span> <span word="Cards">Cards</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="Campus">Campus</span> _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 行文思路 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生该现象的原因，提纲第3点要求针对该现象给出我的建议，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述大学生使用信用卡的现状;分析大学生信用卡用户增加的原因;针对大学生使用信用卡提出我的建议。 高分范文 <span word="Credit">Credit</span> <span word="Cards">Cards</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="Campus">Campus</span> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="recent">recent</span> <span word="years">years</span>, <span word="credit">credit</span> <span word="cards">cards</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="gained">gained</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="popularity">popularity</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="students">students</span>. <span word="With">With</span> <span word="banks">banks</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="focus">focus</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="market">market</span>, <span word="an">an</span> <span word="increasing">increasing</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="applied">applied</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="credit">credit</span> <span word="card">card</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="begun">begun</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="consume">consume</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="factors">factors</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="account">account</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="popularity">popularity</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="credit">credit</span> <span word="cards">cards</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="college">college</span>. <span word="Firstly">Firstly</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="credit">credit</span> <span word="card">card</span> <span word="provides">provides</span> <span word="overdrawing">overdrawing</span> <span word="service">service</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="big">big</span> <span word="attraction">attraction</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="domination">domination</span>. <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="credit">credit</span> <span word="card">card</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="release">release</span> <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="burdens">burdens</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="students">students</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="hence">hence</span> <span word="reduce">reduce</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="risk">risk</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="dropping">dropping</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="lacking">lacking</span> <span word="money">money</span>. <span word="Besides">Besides</span>, <span word="many">many</span> <span word="banks">banks</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="preferential">preferential</span> <span word="policies">policies</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="credit">credit</span> <span word="cards">cards</span>, <span word="like">like</span> <span word="sending">sending</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="gift">gift</span>, <span word="lowering">lowering</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="cost">cost</span>. <span word="Drawn">Drawn</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="policies">policies</span>, <span word="many">many</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="credit">credit</span> <span word="cards">cards</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="concerned">concerned</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="thing">thing</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="credit">credit</span> <span word="cards">cards</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="misuse">misuse</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="credit">credit</span> <span word="cards">cards</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="students">students</span>. <span word="Many">Many</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="credit">credit</span> <span word="cards">cards</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="buy">buy</span> <span word="luxurious">luxurious</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="dont">dont</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="really">really</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="owe">owe</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="big">big</span> <span word="credit">credit</span> <span word="cards">cards</span> <span word="debt">debt</span>. <span word="Therefore">Therefore</span>, <span word="schools">schools</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="banks">banks</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="responsibility">responsibility</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="let">let</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="credit">credit</span> <span word="cards">cards</span> <span word="properly">properly</span>. <span word="Only">Only</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="enjoy">enjoy</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="advantages">advantages</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="credit">credit</span> <span word="cards">cards</span>. 【亮点点评】 越来越流行。 随着，介词。 越来越多的。 过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。 <span word="which">which</span>引导非限制性定语从句。 表示吸引的两种不同的方式，用词富于变化。 由此，因此。 <span word="only">only</span>+状语位于句首，引起句子部分倒装。 佳句临摹 1.佳句：<span word="With">With</span> <span word="banks">banks</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="focus">focus</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="market">market</span>, <span word="an">an</span> <span word="increasing">increasing</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="applied">applied</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="credit">credit</span> <span word="card">card</span>. 临摹：随着市场经济的快速发展，金钱在社会中扮演着越来越重要的角色。 ___________________________________________________________________________. 2.佳句： <span word="A">A</span> <span word="credit">credit</span> <span word="card">card</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="pay">pay</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="tuition">tuition</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="fees">fees</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="hence">hence</span> <span word="reduce">reduce</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="risk">risk</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="dropping">dropping</span> <span word="school">school</span>. 临摹：一些同学希望通过社会实践提高自己的能力，并由此来增加就业机会。 3.佳句：<span word="Drawed">Drawed</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="policies">policies</span>, <span word="many">many</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="credit">credit</span> <span word="cards">cards</span>. 临摹：在就业压力的迫使下，一些大学生开始自主创业。 ___________________________________________________________________________. 【<span word="KEY">KEY</span>】 1. <span word="With">With</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rapid">rapid</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="market">market</span> <span word="economy">economy</span>, <span word="money">money</span> <span word="plays">plays</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="role">role</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="society">society</span>. 2. <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="hope">hope</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="enhance">enhance</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="practical">practical</span> <span word="abilities">abilities</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="attending">attending</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="practice">practice</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="hence">hence</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="chances">chances</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="employment">employment</span>. 3. <span word="Forced">Forced</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="employment">employment</span> <span word="pressure">pressure</span>, <span word="some">some</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="graduates">graduates</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="set">set</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="businesses">businesses</span>.</p>
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