英语六级热点范文7
<p> <span word="Directions">Directions</span>: <span word="For">For</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="part">part</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> 30 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="composition">composition</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="topic">topic</span> <span word="Is">Is</span> <span word="Thrift">Thrift</span> <span word="Still">Still</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="Good">Good</span> <span word="Virtue">Virtue</span>? <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 150 <span word="words">words</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="base">base</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="composition">composition</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outline">outline</span> （<span word="given">given</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span>） <span word="below">below</span>: 1）随着人们生活水平的提高，一些人认为节俭和朴素的生活方式已经过时了 2）但是很多人反对这种说法 3）你的看法是，为什么? <span word="Is">Is</span> <span word="Thrift">Thrift</span> <span word="Still">Still</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="Good">Good</span> <span word="Virtue">Virtue</span>? _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 行文思路 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一种观点，提纲第2点提出另外一种相反的观点，提纲第3点要求谈谈我的观点，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：提出第1种观点：节俭和朴素的生活方式已经过时了，并说明理由;提出第2种观点：节俭和朴素仍然是一种美德，并说明理由;表明我对节俭的看法，并说明理由。 高分范文 <span word="Is">Is</span> <span word="Thrift">Thrift</span> <span word="Still">Still</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="Good">Good</span> <span word="Virtue">Virtue</span>? <span word="With">With</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="improvement">improvement</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="standards">standards</span>, <span word="many">many</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="longer">longer</span> <span word="interested">interested</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="simple">simple</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="style">style</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="ashamed">ashamed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="thrifty">thrifty</span>. <span word="What">What</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="pursue">pursue</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="latest">latest</span> <span word="fashion">fashion</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="eyes">eyes</span>, <span word="thrift">thrift</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="already">already</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="style">style</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="still">still</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="insist">insist</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="thrift">thrift</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="virtue">virtue</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="say">say</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="unprecedented">unprecedented</span> <span word="power">power</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="production">production</span> <span word="doesnt">doesnt</span> <span word="mean">mean</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="entitled">entitled</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="extravagance">extravagance</span>, <span word="because">because</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="natural">natural</span> <span word="resources">resources</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="limited">limited</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="decline">decline</span>. <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="hold">hold</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="waste">waste</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="lead">lead</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="degradation">degradation</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="atmosphere">atmosphere</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="environmental">environmental</span> <span word="pollution">pollution</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="me">me</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="prefer">prefer</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="latter">latter</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="believeWaste">believeWaste</span> <span word="not">not</span>, <span word="want">want</span> <span word="not">not</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="truth">truth</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="saying">saying</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="comfort">comfort</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="enhance">enhance</span> <span word="efficiency">efficiency</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="fact">fact</span>, <span word="economic">economic</span> <span word="growth">growth</span> <span word="depends">depends</span> <span word="enormously">enormously</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="saving">saving</span>. <span word="Besides">Besides</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="millions">millions</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="under">under</span> <span word="poverty">poverty</span> <span word="line">line</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="afford">afford</span> <span word="reckless">reckless</span> <span word="waste">waste</span>. <span word="Therefore">Therefore</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="doubt">doubt</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="thrift">thrift</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="virtue">virtue</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="up">up</span>. 亮点点评 不再。 表示递进。 引出另外一种观点。 在下降。 过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。 用于引出自己的观点或选择。 引用谚语俭以防匮。 <span word="not">not</span> <span word="but">but</span>连接并列结构，意为不是而是。 现在分词短语作后置定语。 毫无疑问。 佳句临摹 佳句：<span word="Our">Our</span> <span word="natural">natural</span> <span word="resources">resources</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="limited">limited</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="decline">decline</span>. 临摹：车祸使人们的财产遭受极大的损失，甚至还夺走了无数人的生命。 ___________________________________________________________________________. 2.佳句：<span word="The">The</span> <span word="truth">truth</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="saying">saying</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="comfort">comfort</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="enhance">enhance</span> <span word="efficiency">efficiency</span>. 临摹：我们永远都不应该低估自己的能力，而应该相信一句谚语：有志者，事竟成。 ___________________________________________________________________________. <span word="KEY">KEY</span>: <span word="Traffic">Traffic</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="caused">caused</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="damages">damages</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="peoples">peoples</span> <span word="properties">properties</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="taken">taken</span> <span word="away">away</span> <span word="thousands">thousands</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="peoples">peoples</span> <span word="lives">lives</span>. 2. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="underestimate">underestimate</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="abilities">abilities</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="proverb">proverb</span>: <span word="Where">Where</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="will">will</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="way">way</span>. <span word="Directions">Directions</span>: <span word="For">For</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="part">part</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> 30 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="composition">composition</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="topic">topic</span> <span word="On">On</span> <span word="Dieting">Dieting</span>. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 150 <span word="words">words</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="base">base</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="composition">composition</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outline">outline</span> （<span word="given">given</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span>） <span word="below">below</span>: 1）现在有越来越多人的选择节食，有的人是为了健康，但是的人是为了有一个苗条的身材 2）分析节食减肥可能带来的影响 3）你的建议 <span word="On">On</span> <span word="Dieting">Dieting</span> _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 行文思路 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象并要求说明原因，提纲第2点要求分析这种现象可能带来的影响，提纲第3点要求针对该现象提出我的建议，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述越来越多的人节食的现象并分析主要原因;阐述节食不当可能带来的影响;针对节食给出我的建议。 高分范文 <span word="On">On</span> <span word="Dieting">Dieting</span> <span word="Nowadays">Nowadays</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="beginning">beginning</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="diet">diet</span>. <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="concerned">concerned</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="health">health</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="diet">diet</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="lose">lose</span> <span word="unwanted">unwanted</span> <span word="weight">weight</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="others">others</span>, <span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="women">women</span>, <span word="are">are</span> <span word="paying">paying</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="attention">attention</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="outward">outward</span> <span word="appearance">appearance</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="leading">leading</span> <span word="numbers">numbers</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="diet">diet</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="dieting">dieting</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="bring">bring</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="negative">negative</span> <span word="effects">effects</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="people">people</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="thing">thing</span>, <span word="quite">quite</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="dont">dont</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="dieting">dieting</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="health">health</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="diet">diet</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="slim">slim</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="them">them</span>, <span word="dieting">dieting</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="useless">useless</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="damage">damage</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="health">health</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="another">another</span>, <span word="some">some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="lack">lack</span> <span word="enough">enough</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="diet">diet</span> <span word="scientifically">scientifically</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="suffer">suffer</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="malnutrition">malnutrition</span>. <span word="Considering">Considering</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="serious">serious</span> <span word="damage">damage</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="unhealthy">unhealthy</span> <span word="dieting">dieting</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="cautious">cautious</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="dieting">dieting</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>, <span word="dieting">dieting</span>,<span word="for">for</span> <span word="whatever">whatever</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span>, <span word="needs">needs</span> <span word="professional">professional</span> <span word="guidance">guidance</span>. <span word="Only">Only</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="right">right</span> <span word="guidance">guidance</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="dieting">dieting</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="expect">expect</span>. 亮点点评 尤其，表示强调。 成为主力军。 过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。 用于引出对危害或负面影响的阐述。 <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span>用于连接并列成分。 考虑到，鉴于，介词。 不管因为什么原因，<span word="whatever">whatever</span>意为无论什么。 <span word="only">only</span>+状语位于句首，引起句子部分倒装。 像我们期望的那样。 佳句临摹 佳句：<span word="For">For</span> <span word="them">them</span>, <span word="dieting">dieting</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="useless">useless</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="damage">damage</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="health">health</span>. 临摹：基因技术不仅使动植物受益而且还有助于提高人类的生活质量。 ___________________________________________________________________________. 2.佳句：<span word="In">In</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>, <span word="dieting">dieting</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="whatever">whatever</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span>, <span word="needs">needs</span> <span word="professional">professional</span> <span word="guidance">guidance</span>. 临摹： 无论你的目标是什么，你都必须通过诚实的劳动来实现它。 ___________________________________________________________________________. 3.佳句：<span word="Only">Only</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="right">right</span> <span word="guidance">guidance</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="dieting">dieting</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="expect">expect</span>. 临摹：只有修满足够的学分，学生才能够获准毕业。 ___________________________________________________________________________. <span word="KEY">KEY</span>: <span word="Genetic">Genetic</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="helps">helps</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="plant">plant</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="animals">animals</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="beings">beings</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="live">live</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="higher">higher</span> <span word="quality">quality</span> <span word="Whatever">Whatever</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="aim">aim</span> <span word="is">is</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="worked">worked</span> <span word="honestly">honestly</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="attain">attain</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="Only">Only</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="adequate">adequate</span> <span word="credits">credits</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="achieved">achieved</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="gain">gain</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="qualification">qualification</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="graduation">graduation</span>.</p>
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