英语六级热点范文2
<p> <span word="Directions">Directions</span>: <span word="For">For</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="part">part</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> 30 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="composition">composition</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="topic">topic</span> <span word="High">High</span> <span word="Salaries">Salaries</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Career">Career</span> <span word="Development">Development</span>? <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 150 <span word="words">words</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="base">base</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="composition">composition</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outline">outline</span> （<span word="given">given</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span>） <span word="below">below</span>: 1）有的大学毕业生选择工作时主要看重高工资，而有的则认为良好的职业发展空间才是更重要的 2）阐述他们各自的考虑 3）表明你的看法 <span word="High">High</span> <span word="Salaries">Salaries</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Career">Career</span> <span word="Development">Development</span>? _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 行文思路 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出两种不同的选择，提纲第2点要求分别阐述这两种选择各自的理由，提纲第3点要求表明我的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出大学毕业生选择工作时不同的侧重点：注重高工资和注重职业发展空间;对比阐述他们各自的理由;表明我的倾向并说明理由。 高分范文 <span word="High">High</span> <span word="Salaries">Salaries</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Career">Career</span> <span word="Development">Development</span>? <span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="year">year</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="views">views</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="choose">choose</span>. <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="focus">focus</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="attention">attention</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="promise">promise</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="salaries">salaries</span>. <span word="Others">Others</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="preference">preference</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="offer">offer</span> <span word="chances">chances</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="skills">skills</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="advancement">advancement</span> <span word="possibilities">possibilities</span>. <span word="People">People</span> <span word="holding">holding</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="usually">usually</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="happiness">happiness</span>. <span word="With">With</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="able">able</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="enjoy">enjoy</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="rich">rich</span> <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="Otherwise">Otherwise</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="suffer">suffer</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="depression">depression</span> <span word="due">due</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="lack">lack</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="enough">enough</span> <span word="money">money</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="holders">holders</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="second">second</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="argue">argue</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="develop">develop</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="skills">skills</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="roundly">roundly</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="possible">possible</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="career">career</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="counts">counts</span> <span word="most">most</span>. <span word="Without">Without</span> <span word="development">development</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="outrun">outrun</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="fall">fall</span> <span word="behind">behind</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="times">times</span> <span word="sooner">sooner</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="later">later</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="view">view</span>, <span word="career">career</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="right">right</span> <span word="choice">choice</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="career">career</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="term">term</span> <span word="satisfaction">satisfaction</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="salary">salary</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="short">short</span> <span word="term">term</span> <span word="happiness">happiness</span>. <span word="Besides">Besides</span>, <span word="generally">generally</span> <span word="speaking">speaking</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="career">career</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="bring">bring</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="salaries">salaries</span> <span word="sooner">sooner</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="later">later</span>. <span word="So">So</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="vote">vote</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="career">career</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="then">then</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="salaries">salaries</span>. 亮点点评 用于引出两种不同的观点或倾向。 用于对比分析两种观点各自的理由。 <span word="with">with</span>+宾语+宾补的独立结构充当状语。 因为缺钱。 强调句型，此处是强调句子的主语。 <span word="while">while</span>引导比较状语从句，意为然而。 一般来说。 选择。 佳句临摹 佳句：<span word="Others">Others</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="preference">preference</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="offer">offer</span> <span word="chances">chances</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="skills">skills</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="advancement">advancement</span> <span word="possibilities">possibilities</span>. 临摹：近些年来，越来越多的人开始喜欢洋快餐。 ___________________________________________________________________________. 2.佳句：<span word="However">However</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="holders">holders</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="second">second</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="argue">argue</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="develop">develop</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="skills">skills</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="roundly">roundly</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="possible">possible</span>. 临摹：然而，持第二种观点的人认为体育明星们为社会做出了杰出的贡献，因此应该得到特殊待遇。 ___________________________________________________________________________. 3.佳句：<span word="Career">Career</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="ng">ng</span> <span word="term">term</span> <span word="satisfaction">satisfaction</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="salary">salary</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="short">short</span> <span word="term">term</span> <span word="happiness">happiness</span>. 临摹：我们之间的共同之处使我们的关系牢固，而不同之处则都会我们如何相互理解。 ___________________________________________________________________________. <span word="KEY">KEY</span>: <span word="In">In</span> <span word="recent">recent</span> <span word="years">years</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="showed">showed</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="preference">preference</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="western">western</span> <span word="fast">fast</span> <span word="food">food</span>. 2. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="holders">holders</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="second">second</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="argue">argue</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="sports">sports</span> <span word="stars">stars</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="contributions">contributions</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="society">society</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="deserve">deserve</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="special">special</span> <span word="treatment">treatment</span>. 3. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="similarity">similarity</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="relationship">relationship</span> <span word="solid">solid</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="difference">difference</span> <span word="teaches">teaches</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="understand">understand</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="other">other</span>.</p>
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