英语六级考前热点高分范文八
<p> <span word="Directions">Directions</span>: <span word="For">For</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="part">part</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> 30 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="composition">composition</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="topic">topic</span> <span word="On">On</span> <span word="Dieting">Dieting</span>. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 150 <span word="words">words</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="base">base</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="composition">composition</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outline">outline</span> <span word="below">below</span>: 1)现在有越来越多人的选择节食，有的人是为了健康，但是更多的人是为了有一个苗条的身材 2)分析节食减肥可能带来的影响 3)你的建议 <span word="On">On</span> <span word="Dieting">Dieting</span> _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 行文思路 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象并要求说明原因，提纲第2点要求分析这种现象可能带来的影响，提纲第3点要求针对该现象提出我的建议，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述越来越多的人节食的现象并分析主要原因;阐述节食不当可能带来的影响;针对节食给出我的建议。 高分范文 <span word="On">On</span> <span word="Dieting">Dieting</span> <span word="Nowadays">Nowadays</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="beginning">beginning</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="diet">diet</span>. <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="concerned">concerned</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="health">health</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="diet">diet</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="lose">lose</span> <span word="unwanted">unwanted</span> <span word="weight">weight</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="others">others</span>, <span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="women">women</span>, <span word="are">are</span> <span word="paying">paying</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="attention">attention</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="outward">outward</span> <span word="appearance">appearance</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="leading">leading</span> <span word="numbers">numbers</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="diet">diet</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="dieting">dieting</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="bring">bring</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="negative">negative</span> <span word="effects">effects</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="people">people</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="thing">thing</span>, <span word="quite">quite</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="dont">dont</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="dieting">dieting</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="health">health</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="diet">diet</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="slim">slim</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="them">them</span>, <span word="dieting">dieting</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="useless">useless</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="damage">damage</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="health">health</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="another">another</span>, <span word="some">some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="lack">lack</span> <span word="enough">enough</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="diet">diet</span> <span word="scientifically">scientifically</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="suffer">suffer</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="malnutrition">malnutrition</span>. <span word="Considering">Considering</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="serious">serious</span> <span word="damage">damage</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="unhealthy">unhealthy</span> <span word="dieting">dieting</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="cautious">cautious</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="dieting">dieting</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>, <span word="dieting">dieting</span>,<span word="for">for</span> <span word="whatever">whatever</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span>, <span word="needs">needs</span> <span word="professional">professional</span> <span word="guidance">guidance</span>. <span word="Only">Only</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="right">right</span> <span word="guidance">guidance</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="dieting">dieting</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="expect">expect</span>. 【亮点点评】 尤其，表示强调。 成为主力军。 过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。 用于引出对危害或负面影响的阐述。 <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span>用于连接并列成分。 考虑到，鉴于，介词。 不管因为什么原因，<span word="whatever">whatever</span>意为无论什么。 <span word="only">only</span>+状语位于句首，引起句子部分倒装。 像我们期望的那样。 佳句临摹 1.佳句：<span word="For">For</span> <span word="them">them</span>, <span word="dieting">dieting</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="useless">useless</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="damage">damage</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="health">health</span>. 临摹：基因技术不仅使动植物受益而且还有助于提高人类的生活质量。 ___________________________________________________________________________. 2.佳句：<span word="In">In</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>, <span word="dieting">dieting</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="whatever">whatever</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span>, <span word="needs">needs</span> <span word="professional">professional</span> <span word="guidance">guidance</span>. 临摹： 无论你的目标是什么，你都必须通过诚实的劳动来实现它。 ___________________________________________________________________________. 3.佳句：<span word="Only">Only</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="right">right</span> <span word="guidance">guidance</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="dieting">dieting</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="expect">expect</span>. 临摹：只有修满足够的学分，学生才能够获准毕业。 ___________________________________________________________________________. 【<span word="KEY">KEY</span>】 1. <span word="Genetic">Genetic</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="helps">helps</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="plant">plant</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="animals">animals</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="beings">beings</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="live">live</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="higher">higher</span> <span word="quality">quality</span> 2. <span word="Whatever">Whatever</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="aim">aim</span> <span word="is">is</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="worked">worked</span> <span word="honestly">honestly</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="attain">attain</span> <span word="it">it</span>. 3. <span word="Only">Only</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="adequate">adequate</span> <span word="credits">credits</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="achieved">achieved</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="gain">gain</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="qualification">qualification</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="graduation">graduation</span>.</p>
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