英语六级热点范文9
<p> <span word="Directions">Directions</span>: <span word="For">For</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="part">part</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> 30 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="composition">composition</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="topic">topic</span> <span word="Road">Road</span> <span word="Accidents">Accidents</span>. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 150 <span word="words">words</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="base">base</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="composition">composition</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outline">outline</span> （<span word="given">given</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span>） <span word="below">below</span>: 1）道路事故会给人们的生命和财产带来很大的损失 2）分析道路事故发生的主要原因 3）如何降低事故发生率 <span word="Road">Road</span> <span word="Accidents">Accidents</span> _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 行文思路 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题，提纲第2点要求分析造成该问题的原因，提纲第3点要求说明解决该问题的方法，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出道路事故的严重性及主要危害;分析导致道路事故的主要原因;说明应该如何降低道路事故的发生率。 高分范文 <span word="Road">Road</span> <span word="Accidents">Accidents</span> <span word="Road">Road</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="problems">problems</span>, <span word="have">have</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="paid">paid</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="concern">concern</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="big">big</span> <span word="cities">cities</span>, <span word="every">every</span> <span word="day">day</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="happen">happen</span> <span word="quite">quite</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="few">few</span> <span word="road">road</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span>, <span word="many">many</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="suffer">suffer</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="property">property</span> <span word="losses">losses</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="lose">lose</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="lives">lives</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="contribute">contribute</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="road">road</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span>. <span word="Above">Above</span> <span word="all">all</span>, <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="heavier">heavier</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="heavier">heavier</span>, <span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="big">big</span> <span word="cities">cities</span>. <span word="More">More</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="vehicles">vehicles</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="road">road</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="chances">chances</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="many">many</span> <span word="drivers">drivers</span> <span word="lack">lack</span> <span word="safety">safety</span> <span word="awareness">awareness</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="dont">dont</span> <span word="comply">comply</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="regulations">regulations</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="some">some</span> <span word="drivers">drivers</span> <span word="run">run</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="red">red</span> <span word="light">light</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="drive">drive</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="drunk">drunk</span>. <span word="Besides">Besides</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="weak">weak</span> <span word="supervision">supervision</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="management">management</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="control">control</span> <span word="sectors">sectors</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="noticeable">noticeable</span> <span word="reason">reason</span>. <span word="Considering">Considering</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="seriousness">seriousness</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="problem">problem</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="effective">effective</span> <span word="measures">measures</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="solve">solve</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="Firstly">Firstly</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="government">government</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="invest">invest</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="improve">improve</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="transportation">transportation</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="transportation">transportation</span> <span word="ways">ways</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="choose">choose</span>. <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="stricter">stricter</span> <span word="laws">laws</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="regulations">regulations</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="punish">punish</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="break">break</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="regulations">regulations</span>. <span word="Finally">Finally</span>, <span word="drivers">drivers</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="enhance">enhance</span> <span word="safety">safety</span> <span word="awareness">awareness</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="develop">develop</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="driving">driving</span> <span word="manners">manners</span>. <span word="Only">Only</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="road">road</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="avoided">avoided</span> <span word="successfully">successfully</span>. 亮点点评 插入语，<span word="as">as</span>意为作为。 表递进。 用于引出原因。 过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。 增加了的机会或可能性。 监管不力，<span word="weak">weak</span>的使用准确地道。 考虑到，鉴于，介词。 用于引出解决办法，表示解决问题的紧迫性,常译为早该是的时候了。 <span word="only">only</span>+状语位于句首，引起句子部分倒装。 佳句临摹 佳句：<span word="In">In</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span>, <span word="many">many</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="suffer">suffer</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="property">property</span> <span word="losses">losses</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="lose">lose</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="lives">lives</span>. 临摹：一些人失败后可能会变得灰心丧气，甚至会放弃成功的希望。 ___________________________________________________________________________. 2.佳句：<span word="More">More</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="vehicles">vehicles</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="road">road</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="chances">chances</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span>. 临摹：许多学生认为考取的证书可以增加他们找工作的机会。 ___________________________________________________________________________. 3.佳句：<span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="effective">effective</span> <span word="measures">measures</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="solve">solve</span> <span word="it">it</span>. 临摹：因此，我们早该关注一下人口过剩问题了。 ___________________________________________________________________________. <span word="KEY">KEY</span>: <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span>, <span word="after">after</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="failure">failure</span>, <span word="may">may</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="discouraged">discouraged</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="hope">hope</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="success">success</span>. <span word="Many">Many</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="certificates">certificates</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="chances">chances</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="employed">employed</span>. <span word="Therefore">Therefore</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="paid">paid</span> <span word="special">special</span> <span word="attention">attention</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="overpopulation">overpopulation</span>.</p>
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