英语六级考前热点高分范文一
<p> <span word="Directions">Directions</span>: <span word="For">For</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="part">part</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> 30 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="composition">composition</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="topic">topic</span> <span word="Employment">Employment</span> <span word="Pressure">Pressure</span> <span word="Facing">Facing</span> <span word="College">College</span> <span word="Students">Students</span>. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 150 <span word="words">words</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="base">base</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="composition">composition</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outline">outline</span> <span word="below">below</span>: 1)目前大学生面临就业难的问题 2)分析导致该问题的原因 3)大学生应该如何应对该问题 <span word="Employment">Employment</span> <span word="Pressure">Pressure</span> <span word="Facing">Facing</span> <span word="College">College</span> <span word="Students">Students</span> _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 行文思路 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题，提纲第2点要求分析该问题产生的原因，提纲第3的要求说明应该如何解决该问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出大学生就业难的问题;分析导致该问题的原因;从大学生的角度说明应该如何应对该问题。 高分范文 <span word="Employment">Employment</span> <span word="Pressure">Pressure</span> <span word="Facing">Facing</span> <span word="College">College</span> <span word="Students">Students</span> <span word="About">About</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="decade">decade</span> <span word="ago">ago</span>, <span word="university">university</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="satisfactory">satisfactory</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="enviable">enviable</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="graduation">graduation</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="now">now</span>, <span word="things">things</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="different">different</span>. <span word="Todays">Todays</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="usually">usually</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="difficulties">difficulties</span> <span word="finding">finding</span> <span word="satisfactory">satisfactory</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="complain">complain</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="graduation">graduation</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="joblessness">joblessness</span>. <span word="What">What</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cause">cause</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="phenomenon">phenomenon</span>? <span word="Firstly">Firstly</span>, <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="enrollment">enrollment</span> <span word="extension">extension</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="universities">universities</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="supply">supply</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="graduates">graduates</span> <span word="exceeds">exceeds</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="demand">demand</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="results">results</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="decreased">decreased</span> <span word="chance">chance</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="individual">individual</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="job">job</span>. <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="university">university</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="tend">tend</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="spend">spend</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="studying">studying</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="subjects">subjects</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="lack">lack</span> <span word="relevant">relevant</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>. <span word="Thirdly">Thirdly</span>, <span word="some">some</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="dont">dont</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="hard">hard</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="college">college</span>. <span word="After">After</span> <span word="four">four</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="life">life</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="havent">havent</span> <span word="gained">gained</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="fairly">fairly</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="positions">positions</span> <span word="require">require</span>. <span word="Facing">Facing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="increasingly">increasingly</span> <span word="fierce">fierce</span> <span word="competition">competition</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="try">try</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="bests">bests</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="change">change</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="situation">situation</span>. <span word="Above">Above</span> <span word="all">all</span>, <span word="when">when</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="school">school</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="heart">heart</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="studies">studies</span>. <span word="Whats">Whats</span> <span word="more">more</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="part">part</span>-<span word="time">time</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="attend">attend</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="activities">activities</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="spare">spare</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="accumulate">accumulate</span> <span word="relevant">relevant</span> <span word="practical">practical</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>. <span word="Besides">Besides</span>, <span word="when">when</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="graduation">graduation</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="attach">attach</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="importance">importance</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="accumulating">accumulating</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="starting">starting</span> <span word="salary">salary</span>. 设问句引出原因，容易引起注意。 过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。 大学生供过于求。 倾向，趋于。 面对日趋激烈的竞争，现在分词作状语。 用心学习。 积累相关的实际经验。 更加关注。 佳句临摹 1.佳句：<span word="Facing">Facing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="increasingly">increasingly</span> <span word="fierce">fierce</span> <span word="competition">competition</span>, <span word="university">university</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="try">try</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="change">change</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="situation">situation</span>. 临摹：经历过艰苦，我们就会更懂得如何应对危机。 ___________________________________________________________________________. 2.佳句：<span word="They">They</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="attach">attach</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="importance">importance</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="accumulating">accumulating</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="starting">starting</span> <span word="salary">salary</span> 临摹：很显然，我们应该更加关注一个人的能力，而不是他的学历。 ___________________________________________________________________________. 【<span word="KEY">KEY</span>】 1. <span word="Having">Having</span> <span word="experienced">experienced</span> <span word="hardships">hardships</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="survive">survive</span> <span word="crisis">crisis</span>. 2. <span word="Obviously">Obviously</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="attach">attach</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="importance">importance</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="ones">ones</span> <span word="abilities">abilities</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="degree">degree</span>.</p>
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