英语六级考试写作高分技巧如何增强语气
<p> 观多年来国家大学英语四、六级作文考试，考生作文成绩欠佳的主要原因除了准确性和连贯性差之外，语句软弱无力也是不容忽略的一个方面。因此在英语写作教学中，如何增强语句表现力的问题必须引起我们足够的重视，以提高学生写作的表达质量。 一、避免使用语意弱的<span word="be">be</span>动词。 1.把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如: <span word="Weak">Weak</span>: <span word="The">The</span> <span word="trees">trees</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="bare">bare</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="grass">grass</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="brown">brown</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="l">l</span> <span word="seems">seems</span> <span word="drab">drab</span>. <span word="Revision">Revision</span>:<span word="The">The</span> <span word="brown">brown</span> <span word="grass">grass</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="bare">bare</span> <span word="trees">trees</span> <span word="form">form</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="drab">drab</span> <span word="landscape">landscape</span>. <span word="Or">Or</span>: <span word="The">The</span> <span word="landscape">landscape</span>, <span word="bare">bare</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="brown">brown</span>, <span word="begged">begged</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="spring">spring</span> <span word="green">green</span>. 2.将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。例如： 1) <span word="Weak">Weak</span>: <span word="The">The</span> <span word="team">team</span> <span word="members">members</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="players">players</span>. <span word="Revision">Revision</span>: <span word="The">The</span> <span word="team">team</span> <span word="members">members</span> <span word="play">play</span> <span word="well">well</span>. 2) <span word="Weak">Weak</span>: <span word="One">One</span> <span word="workers">workers</span> <span word="plan">plan</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="elimination">elimination</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="tardiness">tardiness</span>. <span word="Revision">Revision</span>: <span word="One">One</span> <span word="workers">workers</span> <span word="plan">plan</span> <span word="eliminates">eliminates</span> <span word="tardiness">tardiness</span>. 3.在以<span word="here">here</span>或<span word="there">there</span>开头的句子中，把<span word="be">be</span>动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。例如： 1) <span word="Weak">Weak</span>: <span word="There">There</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="opportunity">opportunity</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="promotion">promotion</span>. <span word="Revision">Revision</span>: <span word="No">No</span> <span word="opportunity">opportunity</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="promotion">promotion</span> <span word="exists">exists</span>. 2) <span word="Weak">Weak</span>: <span word="Here">Here</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="books">books</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="ordered">ordered</span>. <span word="Revision">Revision</span>: <span word="The">The</span> <span word="books">books</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="ordered">ordered</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="arrived">arrived</span>. 二、多用语意具体的动词，保持句意简洁明了。 例如： 1.<span word="Poor">Poor</span>: <span word="My">My</span> <span word="supervisor">supervisor</span> <span word="went">went</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="desk">desk</span>. <span word="Better">Better</span>: <span word="My">My</span> <span word="supervisor">supervisor</span> <span word="sauntered">sauntered</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="desk">desk</span>. 2.<span word="Poor">Poor</span>: <span word="She">She</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="careful">careful</span> <span word="shopper">shopper</span>. <span word="Better">Better</span>: <span word="She">She</span> <span word="compares">compares</span> <span word="prices">prices</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="quality">quality</span>. 三、尽量运用主动语态。 例如： 1.<span word="Weak">Weak</span>: <span word="The">The</span> <span word="organization">organization</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="supported">supported</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="charity">charity</span>. <span word="Better">Better</span>: <span word="Charity">Charity</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="supported">supported</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="organization">organization</span>. 2.<span word="Weak">Weak</span>: <span word="The">The</span> <span word="biscuits">biscuits</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="stacked">stacked</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="plate">plate</span>. <span word="Better">Better</span>: <span word="Mother">Mother</span> <span word="stacked">stacked</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="biscuits">biscuits</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="plate">plate</span>. 四、防止使用语意冗长累赘的词语。 例如： 1.<span word="Wordy">Wordy</span>: <span word="My">My</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="sister">sister</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="preference">preference</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="chocolate">chocolate</span> <span word="milk">milk</span>. <span word="Improved">Improved</span>: <span word="My">My</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="sister">sister</span> <span word="prefers">prefers</span> <span word="chocolate">chocolate</span> <span word="milk">milk</span>. 2.<span word="Wordy">Wordy</span>: <span word="We">We</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="receipt">receipt</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="intend">intend</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="follow">follow</span> <span word="yourrecommendations">yourrecommendations</span>. <span word="Improved">Improved</span>: <span word="We">We</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="received">received</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="intended">intended</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="follow">follow</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="recommendation">recommendation</span>. 3.<span word="Redundant">Redundant</span>: <span word="We">We</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="serious">serious</span> <span word="crisis">crisis</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="yesterday">yesterday</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="chemistry">chemistry</span> <span word="laboratory">laboratory</span> <span word="caught">caught</span> <span word="fire">fire</span>. <span word="Improved">Improved</span>: <span word="We">We</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="crisis">crisis</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="yesterday">yesterday</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="chemistry">chemistry</span> <span word="laboratory">laboratory</span> <span word="caught">caught</span> <span word="fire">fire</span>. 4.<span word="Redundant">Redundant</span>: <span word="My">My</span> <span word="sister">sister</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="bought">bought</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span>, <span word="identical">identical</span> <span word="dress">dress</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="stores">stores</span>. <span word="Improved">Improved</span>: <span word="My">My</span> <span word="sister">sister</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="bought">bought</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="dress">dress</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="stores">stores</span>. 五、杜绝滥用陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语。 例如： 1.<span word="Weak">Weak</span>: <span word="They">They</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="proposals">proposals</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="shape">shape</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="form">form</span>. <span word="Improved">Improved</span>: <span word="They">They</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="proposals">proposals</span>. 2.<span word="Weak">Weak</span>: <span word="I">I</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="input">input</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="guesstimate">guesstimate</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="expenditures">expenditures</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="fall">fall</span>. <span word="Improved">Improved</span>: <span word="I">I</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="figures">figures</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="estimate">estimate</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="expenditures">expenditures</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="fall">fall</span>.</p>
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