英语六级考试写作讲议部分
<p> 第一章 大学英语六级写作宏观分析 本章内容： 一、考试时间 二、字数要求 三、评分原则及标准下的写作要求 （1）评分原则 1. 从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。 （2）评分标准 2分：条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 5分：基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。 8分：基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。 11分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。 （3）写作要求 1、从内容上来看，千万不要跑题 2、语言表达重于内容 （5）提高表达能力的三个方面 四、阅卷实例及高分作文的特点 2008年12月六级试题 <span word="How">How</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Improve">Improve</span> <span word="Students">Students</span> <span word="Mental">Mental</span> <span word="Health">Health</span> 1. 大学生的心理健康非常重要 2. 为此，学校可以 3. 我们自己应当 五、考试题型的回顾和分类 （1）考试题型回顾 1. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="part">part</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> 30 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="short">short</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="entitled">entitled</span> <span word="How">How</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Improve">Improve</span> <span word="Students">Students</span> <span word="Mental">Mental</span> <span word="Health">Health</span>? <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 150 <span word="words">words</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outline">outline</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="below">below</span>: 1. 大学生的心理健康非常重要 2. 为此，学校可以 3. 我们自己应当 2. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="part">part</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> 30 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="short">short</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="entitled">entitled</span> <span word="Will">Will</span> <span word="E">E</span>-<span word="books">books</span> <span word="Replace">Replace</span> <span word="Traditional">Traditional</span> <span word="Books">Books</span>? <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 150 <span word="words">words</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outline">outline</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="below">below</span>: 1.随着信息技术的发展，电子图书越来越多。 2.有人认为电子图书会取代传统图书，理由是 3.我的看法。 3. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="part">part</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> 30 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="short">short</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="entitled">entitled</span> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="Digital">Digital</span> <span word="Age">Age</span>. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 150 <span word="words">words</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outline">outline</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="below">below</span>: 1.如今数字化产品得到越来越广泛的使用，例如 2.数字化产品的使用对人们工作、学习和生活产生的影响。 4. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="part">part</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> 30 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="short">short</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="entitled">entitled</span> <span word="Should">Should</span> <span word="One">One</span> <span word="Expect">Expect</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="Reward">Reward</span> <span word="When">When</span> <span word="Doing">Doing</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="Good">Good</span> <span word="Deed">Deed</span>? <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 150 <span word="words">words</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outline">outline</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="below">below</span>: 1.有人做好事期望得到回报； 2.有人认为应该像雷锋那样做好事不图回报； 3.我的观点。 5. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="part">part</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> 30 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="short">short</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="entitled">entitled</span> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="Importance">Importance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Reading">Reading</span> <span word="Classics">Classics</span>. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 150 <span word="words">words</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outline">outline</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="below">below</span>: 1.阅读经典书籍对人的成长至关重要； 2.现在愿意阅读经典的人却越来越少，原因是 3.我们大学生应该怎么做。 6. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="part">part</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> 30 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="short">short</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="entitled">entitled</span> <span word="Traveling">Traveling</span> <span word="Abroad">Abroad</span>. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 150 <span word="words">words</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outline">outline</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="below">below</span>: 1.近十年来<span word="X">X</span>市有越来越多的人选择出境旅游； 2.出现这种现象的原因； 3.这种现象可能产生的影响。 7. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="part">part</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> 30 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="declining">declining</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="offer">offer</span>. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 150 <span word="words">words</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outline">outline</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="below">below</span>: 1.对公司提供职位表示感谢 2.解释为何不能接受所提供的职位 3.希望给与谅解，并表达对公司的良好祝愿 8. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="part">part</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> 30 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="short">short</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="entitled">entitled</span> <span word="Say">Say</span> <span word="No">No</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Pirated">Pirated</span> <span word="Products">Products</span>. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 150 <span word="words">words</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outline">outline</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="below">below</span>: 1.目前盗版的现象比较严重； 2.造成这种现象的原因及其危害； 3.我们应该怎么做。 <span word="Useful">Useful</span> <span word="words">words</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="expressions">expressions</span>: 盗版：<span word="piracy">piracy</span> 盗版产品：<span word="pirated">pirated</span> <span word="products">products</span> 知识产权：<span word="intellectual">intellectual</span> <span word="property">property</span> <span word="rights">rights</span> 侵犯版权：<span word="infringe">infringe</span> <span word="sb">sb</span> <span word="s">s</span> <span word="copyright">copyright</span>; <span word="copyright">copyright</span> <span word="infringement">infringement</span> 9. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="part">part</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> 30 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="open">open</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="behalf">behalf</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="union">union</span> <span word="asking">asking</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="seriously">seriously</span> <span word="ill">ill</span>. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 150 <span word="words">words</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outline">outline</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="below">below</span>: 1.对病人的简单介绍：目前的病情和家庭情况； 2.目前的困难：无法继续承担医疗费用，需要护理； 3.希望捐助，联系方式。 <span word="Your">Your</span> <span word="Help">Help</span> <span word="Needed">Needed</span> 10. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="part">part</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> 30 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="editor">editor</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span> <span word="complaining">complaining</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="service">service</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="bookstore">bookstore</span>. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 150 <span word="words">words</span> <span word="according">according</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outline">outline</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="below">below</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span>: 设想你买了一本英文词典，发现有这样那样的质量问题，书店的服务态度又不好，因此给报社编辑写信。信中必须包括以下内容： 1.事情的起因； 2.与书店交涉的经过； 3.呼吁服务行业必须提高服务质量。 <span word="A">A</span> <span word="Letter">Letter</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Editor">Editor</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="Newspaper">Newspaper</span> 11. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="part">part</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> 30 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="short">short</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="entitled">entitled</span> <span word="Reduce">Reduce</span> <span word="Waste">Waste</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="Campus">Campus</span>. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 150 <span word="words">words</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outline">outline</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="below">below</span>: 1.有些大学校园浪费现象日益严重； 2.浪费的危害； 3.杜绝浪费，从我做起。 （2）考试题型分类 [考试题型分类] 1、观点对比型考题 2、问题解决型考题 3、应用文 4、应用文 1、观点对比型考题 <span word="For">For</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="part">part</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> 30 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="short">short</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="entitled">entitled</span> <span word="Will">Will</span> <span word="E">E</span>-<span word="books">books</span> <span word="Replace">Replace</span> <span word="Traditional">Traditional</span> <span word="Books">Books</span>? <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 150 <span word="words">words</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outline">outline</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="below">below</span>: 1.随着信息技术的发展，电子图书越来越多。 2.有人认为电子图书会取代传统图书，理由是 3.我的看法。 <span word="For">For</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="part">part</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> 30 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="short">short</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="entitled">entitled</span> <span word="Should">Should</span> <span word="One">One</span> <span word="Expect">Expect</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="Reward">Reward</span> <span word="When">When</span> <span word="Doing">Doing</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="Good">Good</span> <span word="Deed">Deed</span>? <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 150 <span word="words">words</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outline">outline</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="below">below</span>: 1.有人做好事期望得到回报； 2.有人认为应该像雷锋那样做好事不图回报； 3.我的观点。 2、问题解决型考题 <span word="For">For</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="part">part</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> 30 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="short">short</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="entitled">entitled</span> <span word="How">How</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Improve">Improve</span> <span word="Students">Students</span> <span word="Mental">Mental</span> <span word="Health">Health</span>? <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 150 <span word="words">words</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outline">outline</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="below">below</span>: 1. 大学生的心理健康非常重要 2. 为此，学校可以 3. 我们自己应当 <span word="For">For</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="part">part</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> 30 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="short">short</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="entitled">entitled</span> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="Importance">Importance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Reading">Reading</span> <span word="Classics">Classics</span>. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 150 <span word="words">words</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outline">outline</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="below">below</span>: 1.阅读经典书籍对人的成长至关重要； 2.现在愿意阅读经典的人却越来越少，原因是 3.我们大学生应该怎么做。 <span word="For">For</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="part">part</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> 30 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="short">short</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="entitled">entitled</span> <span word="Say">Say</span> <span word="No">No</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Pirated">Pirated</span> <span word="Products">Products</span>. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 150 <span word="words">words</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outline">outline</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="below">below</span>: 1.目前盗版的现象比较严重； 2.造成这种现象的原因及其危害； 3.我们应该怎么做。 <span word="Useful">Useful</span> <span word="words">words</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="expressions">expressions</span>: 盗版：<span word="piracy">piracy</span> 盗版产品：<span word="pirated">pirated</span> <span word="products">products</span> 知识产权：<span word="intellectual">intellectual</span> <span word="property">property</span> <span word="rights">rights</span> 侵犯版权：<span word="infringe">infringe</span> <span word="sb">sb</span> <span word="s">s</span> <span word="copyright">copyright</span>; <span word="copyright">copyright</span> <span word="infringement">infringement</span> <span word="For">For</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="part">part</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> 30 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="short">short</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="entitled">entitled</span> <span word="Reduce">Reduce</span> <span word="Waste">Waste</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="Campus">Campus</span>. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 150 <span word="words">words</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outline">outline</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="below">below</span>: 1.有些大学校园浪费现象日益严重； 2.浪费的危害； 3.杜绝浪费，从我做起。 问题解决型试题的变体： <span word="For">For</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="part">part</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> 30 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="short">short</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="entitled">entitled</span> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="Digital">Digital</span> <span word="Age">Age</span>. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 150 <span word="words">words</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outline">outline</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="below">below</span>: 1.如今数字化产品得到越来越广泛的使用，例如 2.数字化产品的使用对人们工作、学习和生活产生的影响。 3. 应用文 <span word="For">For</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="part">part</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> 30 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="declining">declining</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="offer">offer</span>. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 150 <span word="words">words</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outline">outline</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="below">below</span>: 1.对公司提供职位表示感谢 2.解释为何不能接受所提供的职位 3.希望给与谅解，并表达对公司的良好祝愿 <span word="For">For</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="part">part</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> 30 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="open">open</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="behalf">behalf</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="union">union</span> <span word="asking">asking</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="seriously">seriously</span> <span word="ill">ill</span>. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 150 <span word="words">words</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outline">outline</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="below">below</span>: 1.对病人的简单介绍：目前的病情和家庭情况； 2.目前的困难：无法继续承担医疗费用，需要护理； 3.希望捐助，联系方式。 <span word="For">For</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="part">part</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> 30 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="editor">editor</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span> <span word="complaining">complaining</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="service">service</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="bookstore">bookstore</span>. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 150 <span word="words">words</span> <span word="according">according</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outline">outline</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="below">below</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span>: 设想你买了一本英文词典，发现有这样那样的质量问题，书店的服务态度又不好，因此给报社编辑写信。信中必须包括以下内容： 1.事情的起因； 2.与书店交涉的经过； 3.呼吁服务行业必须提高服务质量。 （4）图表题 <span word="For">For</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="part">part</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> 30 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="short">short</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="entitled">entitled</span> <span word="Traveling">Traveling</span> <span word="Abroad">Abroad</span>. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 150 <span word="words">words</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outline">outline</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="below">below</span>: 1.近十年来<span word="X">X</span>市有越来越多的人选择出境旅游； 2.出现这种现象的原因； 3.这种现象可能产生的影响。</p>
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